Hmmmmm, the optic is Great .....

beautiful map!

Great looking map. Very easy so far.

Nice visuals, but no level outside of a deathtrap. 3/10

The exterior view of the facility is awesome. Well done!

Nice mixing of textures, visuals, good test.
Ilove your outside. Thanks

Awesome puzzle. Very funny. Thanks.
I recorded my gameplay (valve DEM file format): Download [dl.dropboxusercontent.com]. Comments inside video.

Turrets highly explosive. Handle with care

Felt mor like MYST than Portal! Took a few moments to get into the different mindset..

don't really see the point of making such an intro map with no puzzles. doesn't give me much. The design is nice but I would put my effort into making a puzzle

Пожалуй не думал что эта карта закончиться так быстро,но я начал следующую и не пожалел.
Несмотря на некоторую нереальность карта выглядит мило.
Nice map!

Mappack Tested in the 6. Issue of our German Portal-Fanzin
Rating: 4,5/5
Link to the Test: http://www.st-gerner.de/portal-magazin/seite.php?ausgabe=6&seite=12
Link to the Main-Page: http://www.portal-mag.de

looks nice

Nice atmosphere.

A certain door looks like it can't be opened because of the markings on it, but can be opened. It took me about five minutes to figure that out.

The first red room was somewhat horrable. I fell into the goo 2 times because I didn't notice the small switch just beside.

liked the intro, but why somebody want to get INTo aperture science ?

epic map but how do you make custom stories?

I love outside maps! ;) Thx!

Mappack was testet in the 6. issue of our german Portal Fanzine
Rating: 4,5/5
Link to the testpage: http://www.st-gerner.de/portal-magazin/seite.php?ausgabe=6&seite=12
Link to the Mainpage: http://www.portal-mag.de
(I hope its ok that I post the links here)

Awesome map, keep it up.
Heres a link to my workshop maps you should try them out:
http://gtm.steamproxy.vip/profiles/76561198040835562/myworkshopfiles/
Comment and try my workshop maps!
Thanks for playing!

damn soptipp, u scary. i ve expected a screamer any second to be honest

Nice! Please try my chambers ;) http://gtm.steamproxy.vip/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=75668154

очень быстрая карта)

very good map pack

nice maps alot of fun
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Nice. Moving to part 2.

Very nice.

cell prologue

the "watch your step" obstacle got me good.

continue making the maps you intersted me whith them.try and make one whith a cach.See if you can get the pepole who play your maps too pis thare pants!

lol nice, was genuine scared to enter with that siren sounding xD

It is way too dark in the room with the power switch. I had no idea there was even a hazard.

meow

Rough around the edges, but the narrative experience is nonetheless a refreshing departure from the norm.

The puzzles were fairly decent. I LOVED the opening; the ending seemed kind of mediocre in comparison.

It semmed OK to me. Not bad, not an amazimg map. The environment reminded me of the old half life :)

This is for all three levels: I was very impressed. The first part doesnt' really include any puzzles, but the next two do, and they're fairly challenging. Nothing too bad, the most I spent on a section was probably 15 or 20 minutes, but I'm hardly great at this. The environments were interesting, and it had a pretty cool, if short, story.

Good stuff.

To add the elements which are not in the ingame puzzle maker (plants, doors, buildings etc), you need to use the hammer editor. It's the editor VALVe uses when they build levels, so it's a bit difficult to learn. Read this if you're interested: {LINK REMOVED}http://bit.ly/Jjmo28

check out my new room and olds too!
http://gtm.steamproxy.vip/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=71918558

Check out my maps!
http://gtm.steamproxy.vip/profiles/76561198004285261/myworkshopfiles/
Enjoy and vote! Thanks!

I have now updated this map, another one is coming up for part 3

well, I can't really judge just the first part of the map! I'll try maps 2 and 3!

this stinks!

Interesting beginning, though design wise. . .confusing, the facilities that operate the desired door are aesthetically older than the location you wish us to access. This is small gripe, but seriously, take note, cause logically, it just doesn't make sense, I will see the rest of the series starting now.

I got to the push to open door but it wouldn't open :(

I also like outside maps, blue sky... check my map #3 :)

very nice, I'd like to see more portal maps that have some outside parts like this

@Pappythapapsta explore ALL doors

I love the style, but I still say that instant death platforming is never cool.

I honestly cannot figure out what to do at the beginning. neither of the buttons work...