Nice! Really cool mod. Honestly I can't wait to see more if any even if it felt a bit stretched out for a first day, but I get where it's coming from. Just seeing the events of the game through different lens is really cool.

@Jazzy 2 ty for letting me know! it's fixed now, the devs just changed some tags around so it was a quick fix

Seems to have a lot of errors now :((

I really enjoyed this, got really into it. Hope to see some updates in the future if you plan any!

hope you make more. awesome work dude

it's short but interesting, yup, i liked, keep the good rhythm :) (pls add more uncomfortable but cute liz x damian scenes)

Simple, but no less cool! Keep up the good work, I like the way the work is going.

Just finished my first run through, and I'm super impressed with this mod. I love that Damien is getting his own plot with its own stakes, and it isn't just playing second fiddle to the main plot. It's a self-contained story that I'm already becoming incredibly invested in.

I've done a bit of proofreading for one of the other workshop mods here (the red pen mod, if you're wondering), so if that's something you're interested in having help with, I'm more than happy to help. Again, super great mod and I'm looking forward to both replaying it and seeing what content is to come.

This was pretty fun! I was pleasantly surprised by how engaged I was throughout the whole mod. It's really nice to see more stuff about Damien and Liz, it's something I did not know I would enjoy so much.
In regards to criticism, I can only say that I felt like there was a little too much silence. Maybe that's more of a personal thing though? I highly enjoyed everything else though, and I am hoping that there'll be more!

PLEASE keep making more of this. I love Damien and Liz. Need about 20 more chapters as Armorchin said. It's so good and great quality!

Good takes on Damien's character and why he adopts Inco into his friend group.
Also really liking the little extra filler on Liz and Damien's relationship.

If you ever make a follow-up I feel like drama class would be something funny to see how he'll pick that up, especially because Mia is also in it and might cause some actual drama (pun intended) considering his E4 career

the writing really matches the detail that was put into the base-game, something i cant say about any other mods. really well done!!!! love the visuals too, A+

i realize a few parts of chapter 1 ended up being a bit of tell-not-show, which i'll try to stay away from in favor of more natural storytelling, but i couldn't find a better way to introduce these important things as effectively.

about the ear thing, you make a good point... i'm not a dinosaur buff or whatever so it totally escaped me. but like, they have to hear somehow, right?? what would be the saurian equivalent to that expression??

thank you for the offer also. if you or anyone else would like to chat with me you can shoot me a friend request on discord, my username is qwest. (period included!) :)

thank you everyone for the kind comments, really made my week to see you guys enjoyed this short chapter

@RottenArmor my approach with this mod was to try and make it at least a little understandable by everyone, even people who haven't played the base game. ofc i know it's very unlikely anyone on the outside would play the mod under those circumstances but it felt important to add those short descriptions of their relationships anyways to properly solidify where damien stands on each character, like you yourself pointed out; for example, it's implied damien and liz are dating by the time of the formal but you never see them get there, so i didn't want to leave it up in the air whether or not they're dating at this point in the timeline as well.

Another thing, I find Damiens comment about Vincent “Im shocked Mom hasnt pulled his ear over it yet” kind of weird because, do they have ears? I dont know its something I just got to thinking XD

Anyway, thats all minor stuff, I really enjoyed the mod and I expect a lot from it, and as for CGs if you dont mind getting some help Id really like to contribute to the mod with artwork, let me know man

Im loving your approach to Damiens personality and way of thinking, I enjoyed this first chapter in its entirety

As for small details that I felt, the way you introduced both Damiens environment and friends is contradictory to me. First I thought you assumed that we the players would already know about the characters (in this case Olivia and Liz) so you already presented situations which someone who didnt know about the characters way of being wouldnt understand (Impossible yeah, being that come on, if youre playing this mod youll already have at least one ending), and yet then when that character appears for the first time you explain detail by detail how are their relationship with Damien

Personally I prefer the second one, I see that you have to build something of Damiens life and his close ones before all the events in the game due to the lack of information and I like how you are handling it (and the Anon thing, that was fun)

sweet mod cant wait to see more!

For my Christmas wish
I would like more of Damien

I'd like to order 20 chapters of this thank you very much (amazing job!)