Wonderful! The most beautiful story i ever saw in a game possibly only sharing the first place with Metro Last Light. Also the levels are fun and balanced at the level of the best ones in the base game, if i walked your shoes i really woulda try going pro on gamedev. My dude your campaign is much better than the actual game, you're sure it's really your first one?

I know this is rly old but I did just play it and thought i'd share a few thoughts.

the grammer that everyone already brought up is of course an issue, but i won't harp on it because you've obviously heard it enough.

one caveat I think i'd give to this level is that as much as I really love the story, I do think it'd maybe of worked better if it was Phil instead of Charlie? Charlie is already implied to be established as the technician who runs the china restaurant in HLM1, whereas Phil is still up in the air, prime to be expanded on, and i think the fish obsession would work better with a *fish* mask rather than a cephalapod mask.

Other than that, I really liked it! having a dream final level is a nice touch not many people do, and I like that this is really short and sweet!! feeling a strong 7 light 8 on this!!!

Story's good, the level design is great, but the grammar is kinda bad. Other than that I rate 8/10 good job mate

looks good

Love the campaign, good story, I don't like the lack of grammar and spelling errors in the text though. Overall it could use some patching and polishing.

poor charlie :(

Damn dis gooud, meke dis a campagian mannn!

@Lawbringer_hlm2dude


Text errors would occur because I somtimes type to fast and I wouldn't notice until too far into the level. And honestly I did a lot in a few cutscenes so I just didnt want to erase and start over (and I can't use Notpad + to go back because that doesnt work on Mac, which I use)


Also the name reflects Charlie's perspective on fish. He cares about them a lot and there a large part of the ecosystem i.e. "Eco Friendly" as the title.


Also your criticism IS very helpful! I just want you to understand my thought process behind these ideas and placements.

@Lawbringer_hlm2dude


Oh! And you mean the gun racks in the first levels bedroom OK. Yeah those are there bcause it's a Mobster boss's house. So I figured gun racks in the bedroom worked kind of like personal trophies to show of...cuz you know....Russian mobsters be crazy like that sometimes :P

Forgot about random tiles...

Alright, still, what about no comps? Text errors? (Constructive criticism?)

@Lawbringer_hlm2dude


Well with Fishbowl I intended for it to be what I called it in the description a "Super Aquarium". so the idea was that it was large and had A LOT of different attractions (I.e the pool section and the casino section which were emant to convey that).

And if your refering to the ticket machines I used in the casino level with that subway reference those machines with the added signs on the top were meant emmulate those "get coins for slots" type machines.

3rd level, what is it? I mean what is in? Aqua-house? Casino *with ticket to a subway*? Bar? Pool?

I hope you're not serious... Look at your screenshots first. Play first level, and yeah, edge means a lot. Add in the friendlist.

@Lawbringer_hlm2dude

Weaponrack in the bedroom? Uh, dude you might want to re-check that because that's not true (If your talking about Charlie's apartment). Also I don't know what desks you're referring to thats missing a computer could you maybe point out which ones on what level?


I will admit though that there are a lot of small detail problems with some of the levels. But I don't see the ones your mentioning minus maybe me not using edged a lot, other than on certain rugs at least (like on Seachange).

Holy moly, alright, your first campaign... Well, everthing is bad. Really, first of all, random objects. Bedroom with weaponrack? Uh, no problem. Edges, you need edges, without them it's all looks... bad. You have a desk, where computer should be... but, there's no computer at all. 2018 is already and we still have bad campaigns that reach top workshop and no comps on the desks, add me, I am going to help btw

Pretty good campaign. I like it.

@BIg Kowalski Grammar*

Wonderful idea, only a couple of grammer mistakes in the conversation between the octopus and the main character. Otherwise nice and quick campaing. Good job.

I liked this, sure the idea is a little silly (which you seemed to acknowledge) but it also was unique and not really something I had seen done before, at least not in HM2 stuff

that was darn good but had a confusing ending