Hotline Miami 2: Wrong Number

Hotline Miami 2: Wrong Number

46 ratings
Eco Friendly (Charlie, Medium Difficulty, 4 levels)
   
Award
Favorite
Favorited
Unfavorite
File Size
Posted
1.362 MB
11 Feb, 2018 @ 2:25pm
1 Change Note ( view )

Subscribe to download
Eco Friendly (Charlie, Medium Difficulty, 4 levels)

Description
Charlie, the dedicated manager to the Miami Super Aquarium, has just learned that the rundowned place he's loved since childhood is being co-opted and torn down by the Russian Mob. So, now the mob is going to learn that you don't get between a man with an unhealthy obsession and his "friends".


This is my first campaign ever so any feedback would be appreciated.


I should note that I'm aware of the lack of punctuation in most of the sentences. This is due to me having issues with the key configuration on my keyboard and being unable to use things like periods and question marks.
I tried to structure the dialogue in a way to get around this but I understand if it's a problem for some.


Regardless, any other constructive criticism would be great! Hope you enjoy!
21 Comments
El Samu 18 Aug, 2021 @ 1:43pm 
Wonderful! The most beautiful story i ever saw in a game possibly only sharing the first place with Metro Last Light. Also the levels are fun and balanced at the level of the best ones in the base game, if i walked your shoes i really woulda try going pro on gamedev. My dude your campaign is much better than the actual game, you're sure it's really your first one?
SocialJusticeTrashmouth 28 Aug, 2019 @ 12:25pm 
I know this is rly old but I did just play it and thought i'd share a few thoughts.

the grammer that everyone already brought up is of course an issue, but i won't harp on it because you've obviously heard it enough.

one caveat I think i'd give to this level is that as much as I really love the story, I do think it'd maybe of worked better if it was Phil instead of Charlie? Charlie is already implied to be established as the technician who runs the china restaurant in HLM1, whereas Phil is still up in the air, prime to be expanded on, and i think the fish obsession would work better with a *fish* mask rather than a cephalapod mask.

Other than that, I really liked it! having a dream final level is a nice touch not many people do, and I like that this is really short and sweet!! feeling a strong 7 light 8 on this!!!
Gorm 24 May, 2019 @ 10:03pm 
Story's good, the level design is great, but the grammar is kinda bad. Other than that I rate 8/10 good job mate
DarioPEEK 3 Apr, 2018 @ 9:50am 
looks good
Rat Salad 17 Mar, 2018 @ 2:09pm 
Love the campaign, good story, I don't like the lack of grammar and spelling errors in the text though. Overall it could use some patching and polishing.
Silica gel pack 21 Feb, 2018 @ 10:53am 
poor charlie :(
copelow 19 Feb, 2018 @ 1:36pm 
Damn dis gooud, meke dis a campagian mannn!
Kittenpuke  [author] 18 Feb, 2018 @ 12:29am 
@Lawbringer_hlm2dude


Text errors would occur because I somtimes type to fast and I wouldn't notice until too far into the level. And honestly I did a lot in a few cutscenes so I just didnt want to erase and start over (and I can't use Notpad + to go back because that doesnt work on Mac, which I use)


Also the name reflects Charlie's perspective on fish. He cares about them a lot and there a large part of the ecosystem i.e. "Eco Friendly" as the title.


Also your criticism IS very helpful! I just want you to understand my thought process behind these ideas and placements.
Kittenpuke  [author] 18 Feb, 2018 @ 12:25am 
@Lawbringer_hlm2dude


Oh! And you mean the gun racks in the first levels bedroom OK. Yeah those are there bcause it's a Mobster boss's house. So I figured gun racks in the bedroom worked kind of like personal trophies to show of...cuz you know....Russian mobsters be crazy like that sometimes :P
Lawbringer_lord 18 Feb, 2018 @ 12:24am 
Forgot about random tiles...