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the grammer that everyone already brought up is of course an issue, but i won't harp on it because you've obviously heard it enough.
one caveat I think i'd give to this level is that as much as I really love the story, I do think it'd maybe of worked better if it was Phil instead of Charlie? Charlie is already implied to be established as the technician who runs the china restaurant in HLM1, whereas Phil is still up in the air, prime to be expanded on, and i think the fish obsession would work better with a *fish* mask rather than a cephalapod mask.
Other than that, I really liked it! having a dream final level is a nice touch not many people do, and I like that this is really short and sweet!! feeling a strong 7 light 8 on this!!!
Text errors would occur because I somtimes type to fast and I wouldn't notice until too far into the level. And honestly I did a lot in a few cutscenes so I just didnt want to erase and start over (and I can't use Notpad + to go back because that doesnt work on Mac, which I use)
Also the name reflects Charlie's perspective on fish. He cares about them a lot and there a large part of the ecosystem i.e. "Eco Friendly" as the title.
Also your criticism IS very helpful! I just want you to understand my thought process behind these ideas and placements.
Oh! And you mean the gun racks in the first levels bedroom OK. Yeah those are there bcause it's a Mobster boss's house. So I figured gun racks in the bedroom worked kind of like personal trophies to show of...cuz you know....Russian mobsters be crazy like that sometimes :P