Overfall

Overfall

Forsaken Fairy Tale
7 Comments
Bonzai101 2 Jul, 2016 @ 3:37pm 
lol all good, must be having fun with it.
Furin  [author] 2 Jul, 2016 @ 3:56am 
Hello again Bonzai,

unfortunately not my technical ineptity has lead to the delay of an update but a much more sinister thing. I bought Stardew Valley. Now instead of fixing this mod I used all my spare time engrossing myself into this wonderful game. Please forgive my procrastination, I will eventually get to it!

Bonzai101 2 Jul, 2016 @ 1:37am 
Just going to make a comment, assuming you have updated this but haven't uploaded the update.

To update the steam version of your quest you need to re-upload it, usually you do a change log at the same time to list the changes you have made.
Bonzai101 17 Jun, 2016 @ 10:51pm 
No worries, it was really refreshing to see a bit of a different take on what to build in story builder.

For that 'ok' bug you could try recreating the first few nodes and then attach the rest of the story, before deleting the old ones, might fix it.
Furin  [author] 17 Jun, 2016 @ 10:11pm 
Thank you for your feedback!

I noticed the ok/ok issue, but I did not know how to fix it. It is only shown as one dialogue choice in the story builder, the whole story is pretty much one big line, but it shows two bubbles in the "theater" window. This happened after I removed the second choice tree (set sail), but no matter what I clicked, the second choice remained. As I did that in the very end, when everything else was done, thinking three times setting sail would be too much, I was reluctant to start from scratch again because of a bug I did not understand.

You are right about the small font. I noticed that too, but it did not come to my mind to duplicate and split. A very good idea! I will try that together with fixing the spelling errors this weekend.
Bonzai101 17 Jun, 2016 @ 4:55pm 
Really enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing Furin, very cool that is rooted in Innuit legend.

A few things I took note of
Opening - Options are Ok or Ok?

Hope its ok, I've tagged the rest in screenshots (which I can delete after you reply if you wish)
http://gtm.steamproxy.vip/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=705650809
Instead of "She long for seeing him just one more time" it should be "She longed to see him just one more time".
Bonzai101 17 Jun, 2016 @ 4:55pm 
http://gtm.steamproxy.vip/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=705651567
Personally if it is any more than about 3 lines of text in one go it gets to small for me to be able to read on screen, there are a few of these and I just couldn't read them ingame because it was to small which was a pity.
(You should be able to duplicate the node , insert it and then break the text up between the two)

http://gtm.steamproxy.vip/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=705652513
Just one 'O', it is losing in this context, not loosing

All in all a fantastic job and after fixing these minor issues I look forward to having another go!