It's an okay map if this is within your first few maps. But personally I didn't enjoy it too much. There was too much clutter and such that didn't fit with what you were possibly going for. I'd also go with less fire, a smaller area to work with (for more detailed components, also it won't need to be filled with random stuff), and if it even is possible make it so you can slide on the ice. I think it will become really good with work and effort put into it. I do hope you revise it. And keep up the good work!

@Diescord Rotten LMAO agree

No pics, no clicks. How can anyone trust that you're competent enough to make a decent map if you aren't even competent enough to post a screenshot that displays your work?

More screenshots.