Your first one was better in my opinion. This one fell kinda delayed most of the time,
maybe you rushed it?

In rookie, at the begenning, you should have added a note before each slide or do the slide 1 note earlier. now it just feels like you should push when the first note play but you need to wait for the second note and that confusing
Also when you are timing it with the singer, some are too early like the take it in the first refrain, but you really notice the note are off after the first refrain where most of them start to be delayed.