Was kinda expecting more due to the juiciness of the story hook but the sudden ending was kinda disappointing. everything worked ok for me once I figured out how things worked
*spoiler*
use your team mates snarkiness to your advantage to get out of the first room

Magnus PI gave me a quest, but nothing showed up in the task list.

I had the same problem as another fellow. Oily journal and terminal and no options to move forward, so literally can't escape the first room. Myst the main character be a decker to do something with that terminal?

I saw on someone else's video playthrough, that they had a decking 5 option on the terminal, and after looking at the terminal (not even choosing the decking option) one of the party members became capable of dialogue (had a speech bubble over her head). Never happened for me.

Yes, sad. This one has climate and the intro is looking promising, but it looks it is abandoned.

Thumbs down. This is a promising start but so far there's nothing here. This is a prologue to a UGC, nothing more.

how long is it?

Interesting premise. Would love to see a continuation!

good job , hope to see more

Is the beginning broken or something? There's just the "oily journal" and the computer terminal, neither of which advance anything.

Muy bien hecho

I'd like to see more.

I'd also like if the runners models more closely resembled their portraits, particularly with hair.
And if Krom's gonna have horns like that, why not just make him a troll?

I really loved the atmosphere. Continue the good work.

I really liked it! It was enjoyable and I loved how you handled team interaction.

Very enjoyable! I can't wait to see more of this story. Your dialogue was well-written and very interesting. Keep it up!

Really cool. I'm already excited to see more. But was an easy catch, as I'm very into that Lovecraftian mystical style

Seemed like a really cool prologue to an incredibly lovecraftian or simply magical / shamanic darkness type of story. I really dug the labryth almost puzzell feel of it, very AD&D or rather Bioware rpg puzzell feeling. Hope you are able to add more, I enjoyed it and was looking forward to more

Still very much a work in progress - really about half of a mission so far. But it's an interesting hook to start with.

Hey. Really good short piece. I've been involved in Shadowrun Returns a long time. Trust me, even if this is short, there are not many story modules of this quality in the workshop. I'm looking forward to seeing more.