Total War: WARHAMMER II

Total War: WARHAMMER II

Unique medusa unit Morathi's Soulbane SFO
11 Comments
Chancellor Victor Sopot 25 Jul, 2022 @ 11:06am 
Snake mommi lookin fine
EnumaEllis 24 Oct, 2021 @ 8:35am 
THis is a gorgeous model. Thank you!
fredrowe234 2 Jun, 2021 @ 7:27pm 
thank you!
toby van kenoby 22 Apr, 2021 @ 5:53am 
haha i guess
Little Princess  [author] 22 Apr, 2021 @ 5:22am 
@toby van kenoby
Firstly the objective is to make a description short enough for a tiny window and comprehensive at the same time. It must present the unit and its characteristics, pros/cons or special abilities. On the second hand, it should sound good, not to be just dry explanation about what it is.
A hunger "for souls" sounds strange and a little bit obvious, cos of ability name - "soul stealer". I agree, that "lifeforce" doesn't sound much better, but still...
"of the rising of Chaos" sounds clunky and, err, too concretized i guess ? I mean, its warhammer, we already know what chaos is, so it can be shortened a bit. "Chaos rising" (or uprising) is short and exhaustive, much better if you ask me. A capital letter for "C" makes sense tho, but not sure if it is a good reason to force everyone to re-download the mod for that. Its not such an issue, who's ever read this ? x)
toby van kenoby 17 Apr, 2021 @ 8:08am 
Maby "the uprising of Chaos". What I mean is, that it just isn't chaos in general, it's the Chaos with a big C! :)
toby van kenoby 17 Apr, 2021 @ 7:15am 
sorry mispelled "imminence"
toby van kenoby 17 Apr, 2021 @ 7:14am 
the flavour text (unit description) is a little grammatically confusing? If I might suggest: "Forseeing the imminance of the rising of Chaos, Morathi has forged a living weapon against daemons, a creature whose ravenous hunger for souls knows no rest."
Little Princess  [author] 11 Apr, 2021 @ 12:27pm 
@Warcommissar1 Check the description, vanilla version is already available !
Little Princess  [author] 11 Apr, 2021 @ 5:20am 
@Warcommissar1 I've got plans for it. Will be done soon x)
Warcommissar1 10 Apr, 2021 @ 9:16pm 
is there a vanilla version?