Do you get past the desert? or is that the whole adventure?

@Silver-Phoenix
No man THANK YOU! <3

Yeah those 2 weeks were VERY stressful but I can't lie, I had a lot of fun working on the map haha.

I'm sorry for not responding sooner but you can be sure I'll work on another mod for you guys in the next month! I got some really cool ideas for where I want the story to head so I hope you all look forward to it! :D

@asul1916
If you REALLY wanna know. What you played is a different re-telling of an in-counter my DnD group had! Moofelio is actually one of my PC's character!

I also mixed in some other things I have been working on the side. (I'm currently writing a novel) so there is that as well haha.

Thank you for the kind words though man! I can't wait to get back into the swing of things now that I got my new rig! :D

@BowShatter
Sorry to hear about that crash! I'll take a look into that right away when I can! I know the condors are in a odd spot so I woulden't be surpprised if it was a simple mesh issue.

And as for the sounds I never thought of adding them! I'll be sure to fix that for the next map! Thanks for the look out my man!

@Chinag
No haha. For some reason that was just an odd bug I could NOT fix in the 2 weeks of working on this level. I eventually just kept it because it wasen't game breaking but Idealy it is supposed to be just you.

@LukanGamer
Thanks man! It means a lot to hear you guys say good things about the level even with the issues. I love game development and writing so it just seemed very natural for me! And now that I got my new computer I can work on more mods and continue the story I wanted to tell from before.

@Jorvach
Haha thanks bro! I hope you were able to eventually play it! I'm glad you all are liking the fact that there is a single player story map! I am for sure gonna work on more in the future as the feed back I've gotten so far as been amazing! Espically because you guys don't really have a lot of that huh?

Hope you eventually played it and please let me know what you thought! :D

@Gguy
I ALWAYS love feedback my dude. No matter how big/small or good/bad! And I'm glad you liked the overall setting! I honestly love desert biaoms as they are normally my personal favorite. I defintally want to continue this tale if possible and have bigger plans to branch off the story for multiple paths!

As for the cons, I have NO idea why 6 people spawned in with you. It was one hell of an odd bug that I just gave up on fixing as I was at the end of my 2 weeks lol. And I thought there was a journal that I added into the mod. I'll give it a play through in a bit and take a look for myself and get back to you on this. And yeah, spelling is NOT my strong suite. I'll be sure to spell check as I work on my other mod and make sure everything looks good.

And yeah, Moofelio should really stop saying that all the time. What a sterotypical dwarf he is! :P

@cedced3
Yeah there were a lot of odd placements that I had to fix. When I first finished the level it got corrupted and I had to re do half of the entire project by hand. So during that time there is no supprise that a few things were miss placed haha.

I'm glad you liked the look of the pass though! Took a while to get that right as I wanted to see if I could make a small canyon like passage but make it easy to move around? Next time I'll be sure to give more room for the players as I think that is more important.

For starters, sorry to everyone for not replying to this thread! My computer shortly fried right after posting this level and I was able to finally get an amazing rig about 2 weeks ago! And now that everything is set up I can finally get back to doing some work on another mod and other things as well! :D

I'll reply to everyone so far in this comments below.

Thank you all for your feedback so far and I hope you look forward to another level in the near future!

idk wtf ijust played .. BUT I WANNA PLAY MORE XD ... keep up the good work!

Yay! An actual story campagne. Even tough it is quite short currently (what was to be expected when you do this in 2 weeks including learning about the engine). If you have some spare time I d love to se some more.

I dont have any new pros and cons (all i had was said before, even the things I only noticed subconsciously) but wanted to say a big THANK YOU <3

Just wanted to say kudos not many as many have pointed out make single player story, might try in far future if it develops otherwise still nice job making it.

Quick question... Am I suppose to start with all 6 heroes?

Managed to replicate it agian, seemed to be caused by loading a save when near enough to the condors. You should check your walk meshes.

Looks good from what I'm seeing so far. However, it's really quiet and there's a lack of ambient sounds, such as for the waterfall.

Also, I crashed while near the Condors. Reloaded after losing and crashed every time because one condor would walk out of bounds.

HOLY SHIT! Is this what I think it is? An actual single-player story mod? There are so few of these, sadly. Gosh, now I really wish DOS2 would work on my computer again! I've been having crashes every 10-15 minutes of play- *ahem* sorry, I almost started rambling about my own problems there!
The point is, I'm giving this a thumbs-up even though I can't try it out for now. Definitely will when I eventually get a new computer though! :D

Thanks for your work!

Gguy took the words out of my mouth

I normally hate giving feedback cause i appreciate every creation for what it is, but i figured it might help you, so here we go:

Pros:
-Great area design, very realistic and visually appealing
-You set your story in a desert, which is very nice considering the main game mostly takes place in forests, swamps and plains.
-You are among very few people who have ever attempted to make a legit story.

Cons:

-Some objects around the initial area are floating above the ground
-the lighting is very yellow-ish and aggressive on the eyes.
-the main campaign's party members all spawn in the map besides your own character.
-Due to the lack of a journal, it's hard to know exactly what you're suppose to be doing at first sight. It would also be a nice addition if you added some sort journal explanation (outside of dialogue) that would tell you on just how you ended up where you are.
-You said "laddy" way too many times XD.
-there were quite a few spelling errors.

Just came back from your little adventure ^^
First of all, thank you for bringing us some story game mode, it's something I would appreciate to see more often :D
Second, you did a quite nice writing on the character of the bucket dwarf (don't remember his name XD)
Finally, you did a nice map, but the path between the rocks were a little bit too small (Beautiful but small). Also, you have 2 holes in the path near the condor (that you try to hide with some grass XD) , a small floating rock near the bucket dwarf and finally, I was able to HoB near the spawn (Keep in mind that the camera must be out of the player walking area ;) )
Well, for now, I'm waiting for your next adventure :)

I will give it a try right now.

I'll probably try it out at some point, but I would have appreciated having some description of the mod's story themes, as well as a rough idea of the expected playtime to know what I'm getting into ^^'
Cheers !