One of the best warpaints I've seen on the workshop!

it looks good I like the way you're going with the Japanese culture an everything just have a few suggestions maybe ass a few wind swirls next to the clouds or make an unusual version that makes the clouds into storm clouds don't know if you can but it would look pretty fucking sweet.

Very nice, a major improvement on the first version!

The only thing that bothers me are the grey TF symbol on the sun (which makes it look dirty) and the parallel grey stripes on the clouds. Especially because some of them are going in different directions. Just leave the sun yellow and the clouds white, please.

Maybe, if you want some shading add pale blue to the BLU clouds and and pale reddish highlights to the RED clouds. But considering how stylized the clouds are, shading might look odd. Not sure.

Is there a way to add a metallic overlay sheen, like on some of the Tough Break and Jungle skins? Then you could give the sun and sun beams a slight golden sheen and the clouds a white metallic sheen, making them stand out from the softer blue and red background.

Very pretty. Could you please provide some more showcase pictures of other classes' weapons, like medigun, crossbow, minigun, amputator, wrench and so on?

dear god like half of a page is taken up by war paint