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1 Sep, 2017 @ 9:41pm
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The Magician's Secret

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Story Telling Coaster - - - DARK RIDE (ride at night only)!

Channel 5 Gaming - Story Telling Contest (advanced builder) entry.

(This won 1st place in the Heavy Weight division - Wow!!! Thank you so much Channel 5 Gaming!)
Check it out here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ooVSBKUSMDg&t=
And the contest results here: https://youtu.be/DRoGyqmWYVg?t=17m59s

Custom Audio (Narration and Planet Coaster Music) -
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B556Yj5vwyvvVEd4VG5XellWNTA/view?usp=sharing

Website:
https://sites.google.com/view/chantstuff/stuff

The Magician’s Secret

In a run down theater, in a busy town,
Where wealth and entertainment thrived,
A magic show was close to shutting down,
Which meant, no carrots for the bunnies to survive.

Without an audience, there could be no shows.
One ticket cost just one carrot, but if no one came,
The bunnies would starve, skinny as scarecrows.
And the magician, to his shame, was seemingly to blame.

To solve their problem, they put their heads together.
They planned, plotted, and projected the success
Of their very next trick, and altogether,
They practiced for perfection, nothing less.

The magician readied himself, straightening his hat.
He waved his hands and chanted a few words,
“Abracadabra - Alakazam - Ala-ka-zat!”
And just like that, applause could be heard.

The show was a success, they had filled a seat!
Yet, they hung their heads in seeming defeat, as,
Many tummies still rumbled with nothing to eat.
On empty stomachs, they had to plan their very next feat.

And so again, they put their heads together.
To plan, to plot, and to project the success
Of their very next trick, and altogether,
They practiced for perfection, nothing less.

The Magician readied himself, tugging at his gloves.
He waved his hands and chanted a few words,
“Abracadabra - Alakazam - Ala-ka-dove!”
And just like that, applause could be heard.

The show was a success, they had filled some seats!
Yet, they hung their heads in seeming defeat, as,
many tummies still rumbled with nothing to eat.
They had to plan, plot, and project their next great feats.

“Abracadabra - Alakazam - Ala-ka-mond!”
“Abracadabra - Alakazam - Ala-ka-ven!”
“Abracadabra - Alakazam - Ala-ka-bit!”

Trick after trick, they planned, plotted, and projected,
Until their show overflowed, with encore after encore.
Gold and diamonds as payment were accepted,
Buckets and barrels of gifts were collected, and so much more.

What joy and fun, success had brought!
But still, there was a secret kept,
The Magician’s secret was a ploy, a plot,
A grand illusion none could suspect:

The Magician’s secret was the best trick yet,
In essence, the magician was not as he appeared.
You see, he was no more than a simple marionette;
A puppet, a ruse, that the cleverest of bunnies [had] engineered.

- Chant
19 Comments
PsyintZ 15 Apr, 2020 @ 11:54pm 
Alakamazing! Chant has done it again, folks!
Masterful work, m'lady! Thank you for sharing, as always! :steamhappy:
Channel5 Gaming 12 Oct, 2017 @ 6:19pm 
Congratulations! Your coaster placed in the top 10 coasters of September 2017!: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h9Lpp5acSCM
Websearcher 17 Sep, 2017 @ 8:29am 
The is amazing Chant. The story is outstanding and your use of special effects is top notch. I love your bunnies. You are a master builder in my eyes. Brovo. Thumbs up.
jm1992_ 14 Sep, 2017 @ 1:57am 
This was so amazing!!! I really Loved Your Story! Good Job. The Story keeps rolling in my mind!
joridiculous 12 Sep, 2017 @ 5:57am 
Amazing work! Just watched it on the Channel5 gaming 'Storytelling Contest'. So many neat tricks used :steamhappy:
(Only wish; would be to re-mix the custom audio to get the narration centered)
Tsukasuke 8 Sep, 2017 @ 5:43pm 
How could someone downvote this? Gave you an upvote to help boost you back to the top, WHERE IT DESERVES TO BE!
Chant  [author] 8 Sep, 2017 @ 10:05am 
Thank you Bat6irl, I am glad you enjoyed it! Tsukasuke, thank you for the compliments, and constructive critisism! This was my first time (and my cousin's first time - he helped, and was invaluable) messing with audio in this fashion - hopefully all future audio endeavors continuously get better! (Crossing fingers!). I will definitely keep stereophonic sound in mind, next time. :)
Tsukasuke 7 Sep, 2017 @ 12:00am 
I absolutely loved it! The story was awesome, very well told. My only complaint is how the narration seemed to come from only the left ear, otherwise I was enthralled from start to finish.
Bat6irl 6 Sep, 2017 @ 8:21pm 
Love the story, love the scenery....loved everything. Amazing job! I'm sure you'll do awesome in the contest!
Chant  [author] 6 Sep, 2017 @ 7:57pm 
Thank you for all of the wonderful and supportive comments! R3d, a magician never reveals their secrets... but, if you really wanna know.... shoot me a message on discord. ;D