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If you like it, don't hesitate to put a like, I'll go and see your profile
https://gtm.steamproxy.vip/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2085193892
Well, it really looks super clean, the only way you could improve this as it is, would be in the workshop showcase, to change the icon.
Right now it displays the basic steam icon, which is blue, but I would either want it to be """invisible""" using the semi invisible icon method, or just select a game that has a red logo
Well you're only level 25, so there is not much to rate, but here is my opinion :
The info box looks great, its simplistic. However since you're not really high level, it could be more interesting for you to replace that with another showcase, could be screenshot for example, but that's just an option since the info box looks great.
The artwork however has a few things that could be changed.
First the animation is really great, I don't know if you did it yourself or not but the breathing effect is really well done ! However it seems to me to be laggy, I don't know if thats my internet connection that has problems loading it or not, but it seems to be like 15 fps,which really isn't super smooth and kind of wasted the animation work.
Also, the outlines of the girl are really pixelated, which is disturbing to me.
Another thing, an error that I myself did and is still at the moment in my profile, is the fake left pannel of the artwork. It happened to me, it happens to almost everyone once in their life, but the fake gap has to be in the 1st layer to make it look real, but you didn't put it in the first layer, resulting in your animation kind of breaking the "4th wall", which may have been intentional in your case but usually is just some mistake made by distraction that you only notice once it's too late
Last thing, which isn't always necessary but is always best, is having a profile pictures that fits your profile, that way the profile instantly looks alot more clean and serious
Well the profile does look great even tho you only have one artwork cuz you really made good use of the long artwork option.
I really like the bottom part of the artwork that is animated, however you could make the upper part better by either transitionning the black of the background to slowly become the smoke of the artwork, or either by making the smoke a bit more transparent in a way that you could still see the background behind it.
Otherwise it looks great, maybe you could also add a blue outline to your profile pic for it to match the blue outlines of the artwork, and also don't forget to use the same blue color for the outline if you ever add another showcase (workshop, screenshot or maybe even guides) !
As it is right now, it's really messy.
I like how you made your avatar match the steam grey background tho.
For the rest, the order of the showcases needs to be reworked, by putting the most customized ones on the top.
Basically, the top of your profile is what instantly catch the eyes, so it really is a waste to put there a guide showcase that is out of theme, you could keep it on top if you had for example gifs as guide covers, that would match the theme that you are trying to work on.
Then I'd advise you to make your info box shorter, cuz info box with scrolls aren't really optimal.
It really seems that you picked random stuff to just fill up your profile, you need to work on it.
Make sure to find a theme that you totally want to work with, and try to make all your showcases match this theme.
Try to put Artwork, Screenshots, Guide and workshop showcase first, then you can put less important ones like achievements, game collection...
You have 90 steam levels, that's plenty of showcases to work with, you just have to take some time to make it all work together