The thing she's wearing looks a bit unnatural.

First one, something about the eyes idk
Second one, something about the way they hold the hammer

First picture:

- I'm not certain if you wanted to make her chest look like she had a watermelon hidden in it - if yes, Gud. If no, I would suggest making it look more sloped like picture 2

- she has a pretty big thigh gap. A bit unusual

Second picture:

- posture is a little awkward. Make her arms more fluid, rather than rigid. And flip her right hand - she should be holding the hammer the other way

- left arm is too small. Make it meatier, like the right arm. The hand is also small - make it larger



Other than those things, it looks pretty good. Even the lineart manages to work out.

Originally posted by Lunatic Lewin:

First picture:

- I'm not certain if you wanted to make her chest look like she had a watermelon hidden in it - if yes, Gud. If no, I would suggest making it look more sloped like picture 2

- she has a pretty big thigh gap. A bit unusual

Second picture:

- posture is a little awkward. Make her arms more fluid, rather than rigid. And flip her right hand - she should be holding the hammer the other way

- left arm is too small. Make it meatier, like the right arm. The hand is also small - make it larger



Other than those things, it looks pretty good. Even the lineart manages to work out.

o dam

Originally posted by Lunatic Lewin:

First picture:

- I'm not certain if you wanted to make her chest look like she had a watermelon hidden in it - if yes, Gud. If no, I would suggest making it look more sloped like picture 2

- she has a pretty big thigh gap. A bit unusual

Second picture:

- posture is a little awkward. Make her arms more fluid, rather than rigid. And flip her right hand - she should be holding the hammer the other way

- left arm is too small. Make it meatier, like the right arm. The hand is also small - make it larger



Other than those things, it looks pretty good. Even the lineart manages to work out.

thanks pal, i'll use these and make some redraws

also a small point regarding the watermelon thing: i cannae draw chests (male or female) properly from the front, could ya give some advice on what to do?