"Same" was meant to be "some" I think?

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Originally posted by Angel.9 Rakou Cobra:

"Same" was meant to be "some" I think?

Good catch! Fixing now.

Fixing "clamaity" now! I'll fix the 1 times as well. Thank you!

On the right click tool tip for Deep Sand it reads: "Match cards to clear the Deep Sand. Drawning cards regenerates the Deep Sand." The bolded word should be "Drawing".

ETA - Found another one - the story that opens Chapter 6. "The work of the maiden had taken its toll, and Bel's arms were deeply scared with the taint of chaos." The bolded word should be "scarred".

Thank you for the typo notices! They'll be fixed in the next build.

Excellent, and I'll add any more I happen to find (if any).

Found another typo in the story that opens Chapter 7 - "I saw it... I told him not to go... he was covered in thick fog from within the crumbling walls... it swallwed him... " Correct spelling of the bolded word should be swallowed.

Same story, just a little later on - "May this light guide your sprit... " Bolded word should be spirit.

Thank you! Will be fixed in next build.

fairie rescued says , "nice to MEE you [USERNAME]"

side typo version in the lower right corner says 8 chapters available.

Good catch! That faerie saying will be fixed in next build.

Previously the total chapters was hard coded. In the next build it is dynamically updated based on total chapters available according to the game's adventure playlist.

Originally posted by Pkeod // Subsoap:

Good catch! That faerie saying will be fixed in next build.

Previously the total chapters was hard coded. In the next build it is dynamically updated based on total chapters available according to the game's adventure playlist.

nice! just saw the most recent update notes... dynamic indeed!

"Her mother was a maiden..." "Maiden" is a synonym for "virgin", not just for "young girl". It's like saying her mother was a virgin, she was a virgin, and her daughter would be the next virgin.

"Bel had taught Aeli much of the lore ...though there are some things". Should be "though there were some things" so you keep the whole sentence in past tense.

There are lore reasons for the name which may appear somewhere. The role is based on multiple historical religions but not exactly any of them. I don't know if I'll ever explain it all, some people are not comfortable with traditional spiritual concepts even in fiction.

Thank you for the tense correction! It will be fixed in the next build.

"without the silver broach of the source maiden". That should be "brooch"; a brooch is jewelry, a broach is a hole in the wall.