(Note: For ENGLISH speakers -> The game starts off in another language. There are three options. Click the second/middle one. Then you will see two arrows pointing LEFT and RIGHT. Click the RIGHT arrow and you should be able to change it to English. Carry on.)

This really isn't that bad. For an English version. Honestly... I liked the backgrounds and the character designs. For some reason all the background/NPC characters were hotter (guys especially... Looking at you bullies and Doctor. Mhm.)

English... You can understand it! There are problems with names being changed/misspelled or "he/she" being swapped, even the choices sound rather odd and confusing at times, but...! It's readable!

The major problem this game has is... There isn't enough information on characters or even the several plot points that supposedly merge into one. As in... We just get the really small tidbits of "this situation" or "this character", but the rest...? I am rather curious about how this whole thing came to be. About the kitty robot. About literally everything and anything.

I also wish to know what time period are they in...? I get this is a fantasy setting, however they have cars or "carriage" (a fancy, modern car is pictured) as the text wrote it. They have comics... Yet the females seem to be wearing dresses from a different era...? o.O

I need to point this out as well: If you are sticking to a society that revolves around rich/poor and perception of others... Sasha wouldn't had it easy if she continued to do what she did. IF she continued to defend the heroine, then rumors would start. And really vicious ones at that. People, her "clique" would begin to question as to why the hell did she do what she did and why does she even associate herself with the heroine? If there is a powerful/rich person and people find a way to bring him/her down? It's all over. They'll go for it.

Not only that, in the "romantic plot"... Sasha tells the delinquents a lie about her and Rossa. Mm... But no one else finds out about it...? It would be all over school the next day... She would get hounded and questioned.

Anyway. It's your story. I just wished to point those things out.

As well as: anytime the backgrounds change... The entire screen turns white. So be careful if you are sensitive to really bright lights.

Apart from everything mentioned above... It's harmless. Nothing really stands out, but it does tell you a story and you get a few pieces here and there about... Stuffs... XD

For all its faults... I do see that there will be more content added in the future and perhaps then we will get more information... Routes... Etc. I will continue to read it.

All that to say... It's not bad.

(I do wish you the best with future stories/improvements and see how much better you can make it. And for that... I will leave you a positive review as an encouragement. :) )