I would say it just needs some editing to tighten the pacing and increase narrative momentum. If you look at the scripts for Snoot Game and Wani, they're pretty tightly paced and don't rely on tons of exposition or too lengthy dialogues between characters (for the most part).

I still don't get why estrus season would be in winter though since Dinos don't like the cold. It would've made more sense for it to be in spring or summer. I think the plot should take place a few months after the Winter Formal when it's spring and they're on the verge of graduating. Though I guess that would undermine the part where Liz is cold. I suppose that could happen on a chilly rainy day in spring.

I really want Mia to be an actual major character and instead of some 1 dimension bully that just randomly gets inserted to the plot

(I get that its estrus but pleaseeee dont make her whole personality and feelings onesided. Cause there was a certain fanfic......)

for me i would like for the mod to keep expanding and fleshing out most of the cast, the Liz pov was pretty enjoyable.

another thing would be more music/ambiance, love me some immersion.

thats it for now since theres not much content. Keep cooking

Olivia's uncensored a

would like the mod to not be just generic porn plot but have actual development for the less fortunate characters like Mia and Liz, also would like it to be less tedious and more to the point, I think the whole section with Liz' POV was a good idea but it was so ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ long I lost interest halfway, so yeah, those are my suggestions personally.

Hey! just wanted to say i really appreciate there being a Ben route, i look forward to how it progresses, my main hope is its not left behind/handled eh... lesser? i guess? i dont know words can be hard, just due to being MxM

truthfully. its coming out pretty well, i would recommend is to take your time and have fun. this is your passion project not a burden for you to rush due to others complaining, stay safe. (ben having a secret rout would be funny af though)

edit: didn't see bens name on the list

Hoping for the Ben route, take your time, keep up the good work

A route with Sr. Ferris, after that sick dance he showed he still have energy to give.

The dominance and corruption points systems are odd. Perhaps it could be turned on or off? I personally find it offputting.

An Anon cameo. Fic writers love to say that he's Inco's cousin or some ♥♥♥♥

+18 stuff.
Victoria and Jenine routes.
Oh, and I agree with others - please make Mia have actual personality!
(Also it would be very funny if you made a 'secret route' that gives Lunara a little 'extra', maybe using art from that 'legendary' Lunara mod :-D )

Oprindeligt skrevet af AfterTheTruth BR:

The dominance and corruption points systems are odd. Perhaps it could be turned on or off? I personally find it offputting.

Same here