Total War: WARHAMMER III

Total War: WARHAMMER III

Guv's Expanded Faction Frontend Mod (Update Patch 6.0.2 / 2024-12-27)
Guvenoren  [udvikler] 26. maj 2023 kl. 9:04
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Sidst redigeret af Guvenoren; 26. maj 2023 kl. 9:05
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GreyHound 10. sep. 2023 kl. 7:13 
Hi Guvenoren. Just stumbled upon this and made a quick check through the descriptions, here are my notes on little mistakes found in:

CA's climate suitability interface uses Unpleasant instead of Unsuitable. Might be worth updating descriptions for consistency.
Malus' faction effects: "to" is repeated twice in Tzarkan's Whispers' description; various is misspelled as "varius" in Rite of the Warmaster's description.
You could rewrite Wulfhart's Acclaim to say "higher quality reinforcements" to avoid the hyphen.
Alith Anar's Invocation of Morai-Heg: guaranteed is misspelled as "guarenteed'.
Oxyotl's Visions of the Old Ones: receives is misspelled as "recieves"; various is misspelled as "varius".
Ikit Claw's Forbidden Workshop: devastation is misspelled as "devestation".
Snikch: Shadowy Dealings also has receive misspelled as "recieve"; his unique Scheme is called "Revitalising", immediately is misspelled as "immedietly" in the same description.
Drycha's Court of Addaivoch could be rewritten to say "A court of vengeful Forest Spirits that doesn't accept Elven lords into its ranks", same could be done for Durthu's court.

Other than that, seems great, will be using it from now on because it definitely represents certain unique factions better. I also learned that Valkia's faction has some interesting effects tackled on that I was never aware of.
Sidst redigeret af GreyHound; 10. sep. 2023 kl. 7:16
Guvenoren  [udvikler] 10. sep. 2023 kl. 7:19 
Oprindeligt skrevet af GreyHound:
Hi Guvenoren. Just stumbled upon this and made a quick check through the descriptions, here are my notes on little mistakes found in:

CA's climate suitability interface uses Unpleasant instead of Unsuitable. Might be worth updating descriptions for consistency.
Malus' faction effects: "to" is repeated twice in Tzarkan's Whispers' description; various is misspelled as "varius" in Rite of the Warmaster's description.
You could rewrite Wulfhart's Acclaim to say "higher quality reinforcements" to avoid the hyphen.
Alith Anar's Invocation of Morai-Heg: guaranteed is misspelled as "guarenteed'.
Oxyotl's Visions of the Old Ones: receives is misspelled as "recieves"; various is misspelled as "varius".
Ikit Claw's Forbidden Workshop: devastation is misspelled as "devestation".
Snikch: Shadowy Dealings also has receive misspelled as "recieve"; his unique Scheme is called "Revitalising", immediately is misspelled as "immedietly" in the same description.
Drycha's Court of Addaivoch could be rewritten to say "A court of vengeful Forest Spirits that doesn't accept Elven lords into its ranks", same could be done for Durthu's court.

Other than that, seems great, will be using it from now on because it definitely represents certain unique factions better. I also learned that Valkia's faction has some interesting effects tackled on that I was never aware of.

1: Climates are listed as Suitable - Unpleasant - Unsuitable, if I am not mistaken no?

Excellent typo noticed. I often get lost in grammar checks and sentance building. I will correct it next mod patch
GreyHound 10. sep. 2023 kl. 7:28 
It's Suitable - Unpleasant - Uninhabitable in the interface.
I'd also partially rewrite Harkon's Fragmented Psyche to read "Harkon is a partially insane Vampire Lord; one of his various personalities takes control at random every few turns, each having their own unique strengths and weaknesses...". Current description seemed slightly clunky.
Guvenoren  [udvikler] 10. sep. 2023 kl. 7:32 
Thanks for pointing that out. I will take note of that.
In WH2 I think it was unsuitable in some cases
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