Hello! So I noticed that in your dialogues the enemies, straight after it finishes, have to take a moment to realise you are there, then fight you.

In certain dialogue encounters, if you are meant to start fighting straight away there is a command you can add to dialogue to make the enemy participants aware of your presence and go to fight you straight away... type it as the last thing in the dialogue, or before the say 1 blah blah blah thingy:

send_level_message "make_participants_aware"

also, for the first stormy level with the thief, try adding an ambient sound hotspot. put in the file path for the ambient rain, and voila! asside from thunder... you have rain!

You can also add a level param called "Custom Shader" , and put in various shaders.

http://wiki.wolfire.com/index.php/Shader_And_Weather_Effects

I recommend #RAINY for the storm level.

also another param... "GPU Particle Field" ... #RAIN in there.

I'm doing this mostly from memory, so not everything may be accurate. spelling and capitol letters matter. so...

Thank you so much! You've been very helpful and I appriciate it :) I'll be adding these in the next update

No problem pben9.

I have something that will really help you.

http://wiki.wolfire.com/index.php/Checkpoints

Look at it it. It's very simple and probobaly helpful.

Oh and you should update the loadingscreen picture for the first level.

i think there should be a Co-op spiltscreen mode! as well as harder or more enemies :)
usually spilt screen campaigns are really fun but not many of them :C