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"Seems just lazy"
It would take me like about 20 secs to delete that pupil and upload it without it, but I just won't. This magical hat was on a fantastic magical adventure where it traveled through many fantastic and dreamy worlds while the disastrous Monoculus Event occured that left our favourite drunk scottish demolitions expert with just one eye.
PS: I don't like the missing eye trend, I am sorry.
https://wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images/thumb/4/4a/Demoman_virtual_viewfinder.png/600px-Demoman_virtual_viewfinder.png?t=20130711234642
https://wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images/thumb/9/90/Demo_Seal_Mask.png/737px-Demo_Seal_Mask.png?t=20111215211715
Again, II don't even particularly care. I think the hat doesn't look good to begin with. I just suggested that if worn by the demoman, it should have an eye patch like other hats. It's a littl;e extra detail, that's it. If the guy who made the hat doesn't want that, it's his choice.
Other than that, if you want actual constructive criticism. I think the base of the hat looks kinda flat and overall the hat is lacking detail. It's hard to explain. The whole hat just looks very basic (looks like a plate with a bucket and some bands around it) and done quickly without putting too much thought into it.
I know making 3d models takes time and effort and I would struggle to make something even close to this without running into dozens of roadblocks, but I still think I am allowed to give you my honest feedback. I mean that's what the workshop is for, right?
https://wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images/0/0e/Painted_Ghostly_Gibus_UNPAINTED.png?t=20121116234419
Then you have a cylinder on top. And that cylinder has a few tubes around it with some ovals as eyes.
I do realize that's the basic idea of the hat. A top hat with some goofy looking eyes. My issue with it is how it looks. It's plain, it has no character to it. The shapes the hat is composed of are all plain. The cylinder seems just straight and plain.
Again, I don't wanna insult you or your work, I've looked at your other submissions and they're pretty good. But this one honestly looked like you needed to meet a deadline and threw this hat together in like an hour in blender.
There is no insult, i didn't even modeled the hat. But I think you are missing the point of the item. It is not just a top hat. It is a cartoonish-inspierd-in-something-you-may-know hat. If something has a simpler style or shape doesn't mean it's lazy or bad.
Maybe it's because I have bad eyes for this sorta stuff or maybe it's because the pictures don't do it justice and it looks much better ingame. Either way, that's just my dumb opinion, if the majority of people like it then there isn't really a problem here.