Regardless of how I feel about the hair, I'm worried that the separation of the helmet bits would be obtrusive from the over-the-shoulder camera. The separation is quite extreme, and the angle of the side bits means that they take up a lot of horizontal space. If this does make it in, I hope these things are tweaked to take up less room on the screen.

I also think the energy textures for her rings could stand to be better; I think they're a bit simple. But that's more of a question of taste.