its aight

Easy but good story. I ESPECIALLY liked the whole segment of Pardo trying to figure out a way to lie his way out of the officer's murder.

good story

Nice job!

I loved the story continuing on the hotline story good work looking forward to playing the rest!

Nice easter eggs from Vice city & GTAV ( 100% of columbians & Jimmy who sold the boat ;) ) Anyway, very good story :D

Lol why was henchman's first level an almost exact recreation of the dialogue from vice city?

SO COOL! I appreciate how long it must've taken to recreate the locations from Hotline Miami.

I just played the first mission, and I was already impressed AND hooked on the intro to the FIRST level.

Chapter IV is released !!!

Hella cool, looking forward to the conclusion.

Ok everyone, i know it's been two months since chapter III was released. I just wanted to tell you that chapter IV will be released in a few days ! (about time!)

I still have to draw some custom sprites, J and I are gonna review all the dialogues to make sure that there is no mistake. And everything should be ok!

Thanks again for your patience!

Hotline miami 1.5 is not over yet !!! :)

It seemed like the Henchman was working for someone entirely different than in the main story, but that was only for the first few scenes. Sorry to have confused you, I didn't try the other chapter sets before I wrote that comment.

Sorry for my late answer

Lena -> Is the story you're talking about is in the level "The Deal" in chapt I (Level 3) ?
I'm not sure I understand your point. Which part of the game's plot explains it ? ( My scenario has certainly some flaws so... maybe you saw something that I didn't in the main story that is at odds with my story )

II and III have the most noticeable errors. It's hard to pin down a specific cutscene because they all sound a little engrish-y in general (no offense).

I love your choice of characters and the plot you've written. One of the stories confuses me because I was pretty sure it was already explained by the game's plot (The drug trade) but I'm sure that's explained in further charpters.

Senzuri Champion:
I'll re-upload chapter I, II and III with correct sentences after chapter IV will be released (it's getting closer).
English is not my native langage, so someone is helping me with the dialogues. Unfortunatly she couldn't help me for chapter III so i'm sorry for all the errors ^^". I'll try not to make mistakes in chapter IV.

Which cutscenes were hard to follow? I'll work on it.

The general plot is good but the text is riddled with grammatical errors, especially in the other two parts. It makes it harder to follow what's going on.

I just sat down and played all three chapters. I was pleasantly surprised! The dialogue is great, i enjoyed playing as all of the different characters and the levels were spectacular. the Mansion from 2 i think was my favorite. It's cool how this story doesnt conflict with other big campaigns too, like miami holocaust. All in all, my favorite campaign by far!

This was really damn good. It has an interesting and easy to follow story (which isn't as true in other campaigns, like Parker vs 50 blessings). The levels are really well designed too. Can't wait for chapters 4-6, and I hope the other chapters make the front page too!

great

The best campaign i've ever played!

Love that vice city refrencensys.

Nice!

Chapter III is released!

Great levels, some had minior issues like to thin doorways, or rough level transitions, but i had fun nontheless, fine piece of work!

I like how a police station and a crime scene are chapter 13 and chapter 2 in the first game

Nice touch with the Vice City references in both this chapter and chapter 2

Chapter II is released!

It's a very very good campaign for HM. It was very interesting for me to play this! Hope the other parts will be great :))

I really liked it, can't wait for August, good work man! :D

This is really bad. The floor lacks edges, the walls are all off, the enemy placement is frustrating, the music is repetetive, the custom sprites are only half decent, there's way to many spelling/grammatical errors, and the story has a lot of inconsistances.

I really think you can make this campaign good, but it's going to take some work. I hope the creator makes this campaign something great and learns from the current mistakes.

No hard feelings, right?

If you keep this up nobody is going to stick around for more. Please fix it.

This is terrible. The floor lacks edges, the walls are all off, the enemy placement is frustrating, the music is repetetive, the custom sprites are only half decent, there's way to many spelling/grammatical errors, and the story has a lot of inconsistances.

I really think you can make this campaign good, but it's going to take some work. I hope the creator makes this campaign something great and learns from the current mistakes.

No hard feelings, right?

This is terrible. The floor lacks edges, the walls are all off, the enemy placement is frustrating, the music is repetetive, the custom sprites are only half decent, there's way to many spelling/grammatical errors, and the story has a lot of inconsistances.

I really think you can make this campaign good, but it's going to take some work. I hope the creator makes this campaign something great and learns from the current mistakes.

No hard feelings, right?

I just finished chapter 1. Great story so far. Please continue this. Keep up the good work dude! :)

I love the attention to detail with the Hotline Miami locations. Great work.

Great! I just finished it and Chapter II is close!

Hey guys, We just finished translating the dialogues. I have to make the cutscenes and some sprites, a final test to spot the last bugs and errors and it should be done.
Chapter II should be released Saturday night or Sunday.
Again thanks a lot for your comments!

U know wath happens to thugs like U

Haha! The GTA: Vice City reference! When the mobster loses his money

So cinematic

spoiler:
han solo dies xdddddd

omfg god that close to the normal ´game amazing.

cant wait for more

There was a couple of spelling errors, and copied dialogue from Vice city during the hitman part. Not bad though.

Love that Vice City refrence you put in there! Haha! Great campaing, the best I seen so far.

really good! looking forward to more :)

This is how you make levels
Not too many enemies but at the same time challenging
Great story too

one of the best campaings out, great job man!