@cardboard_box - There was nothing new or original in this map. Been done over and over and much better.

Hey, I made a video with your map =)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uoS-TLOwIS4

Other commenters are being kind of harsh and I usually dont write comments on maps but I just want you to know that I enjoyed this map. I would have liked to see you do more with this idea though. Sometimes I enjoy more maps that introduce new ideas more so than challenging maps. Keep coming up with your own original ideas.

I played 31 front page maps live on http://twitch.tv/deathwish808 and this was one of them. I broke quite a few of them, so I recommend checking it out so you can fix your map if it's needed. Due to the amount I played I don't have time to link to each specific time each map started. (The one I skipped was not a front page map at the time.)

*No puzzle whatsoever and basically another pointless and non-thought evoking map.

Blind run: http://youtu.be/YFOM9AVeM2g

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Looks like you exported from the in-game editor and used Hammer with no rhyme or reason. I can tell you didn't do a full compile because the map's lighting looks a bit grey instead of brightly lit. I can tel that the long-tube lights aren't even on because no light is emitting from them! You need more Hammer experience. Here's the man to help you:
http://www.gtm.steamproxy.vip/sharedfiles/filedetails?id=292356592

Try my SP map?
http://www.gtm.steamproxy.vip/sharedfiles/filedetails?id=377129237
Try my COOP map?
http://www.gtm.steamproxy.vip/sharedfiles/filedetails?id=376181211