Another thing you did wrong not provide an opening title. Also, Scout as the protagonist? That's just cliche! Try another class next time.

Also don't forget Camera Angles

I ditto KellyKewbie. The story's good and interesting (plenty of Saxxy's have failed because of a lack of story / character development), you just need to refine your animation, character movements and poses.

its so bad its good

I see what you're trying to tell. And the animation was actually not that bad. But it just felt like Gmod too much rather than SFM. And if there are some music and various different dialogues more than just screaming sounds it would be much better. I see a lot of people seem to hate this, but I quite enjoyed it. Please keep your work and never give up.

You call this an SFM animation? More like, done in GMOD, no doubt.

Are you even seroius? How is it got here? Now look dude. Even if you want to be animator :
1. Ask people about their opinion of your anomation *not parents.
2. Learn how-to animate, no self study *no need to invent wheel. Just find some study videos or books.
And only then you can pretend on something like Saxxy.

bad animation. no music. ear rape. and... no plot. what's the drama?

https://youtu.be/O8LIqGfuvQw

People being like "sorry animation is bad" when at some parts tehre arent even animation, so im like 99% sure this is a joke animation.