Slapshot: Rebound

Slapshot: Rebound

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Revolutionary Turn for 'The Hub'
Vytvořil: AZTEK
This should be a bigger thing..
   
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The Script + Thoughts
I'm surprised that "Karen" isn't a more popular hub category. Like, there's so much potential.

Karen: "Excuse me, but do you have this milk in a different size? I need 2 litres, but you guys only have 1 litre!"

Guy who looks really young, but trust me, he's an adult: "Umm... I'm not so sure, I'll have to check in the back."

Karen: "Ugh, hurry up then."

Guy goes in the back to look for the milk, but instead of looking for the milk, he peeks out the door to get short glimpses of Karen's milk jugs

Guy starts touching himself, eventually unzipping his pants to start stroking his meat

Camera pans to Karen's body, occasionally zooming in on Guy's face and pp

Karen, after busting through the door: "UHH HELLO? WHY ARE YOU TAKING SO LONG!?!?"

Guy, quickly grabbing a bag of frozen chicken nuggets to cover his junk: "Uhh ummm nothing! I'm just looking for your milk!"

Karen, while grabbing the back of nuggets: "THAT'S NOT MILK, THESE ARE NUGGETS YOU FOOL"

The guy does a death grip on the bag, desperately trying to hide his junk

Karen pulls it hard enough to break the guy's grip, exposing his hard meat

Karen does that trademark Brazzers shocked face. You know, the one everyone makes on the hub ads. You know what the heck I'm talking about

Karen: "What the EFF!!???"

The guy: "No no no, it's not what it looks like! Please don't call my manager!"

Karen walks away, but slips, and the guys penis magically slips inside of her

They start banging

The porn ends with the manager walking in and saying "What the F IS GOING ON???"
Počet komentářů: 2
riv 30. srp. 2021 v 5.23 
-3.5/20 script. Hygienically You'd tell it's only an atom of how you could copy the scene and environment of a buying station or marketplace. As a dumbass enthusiast it is sad to have an genuine emotion to a video and experience it whilst cumming as if it was possible to happen in real life (this is a hygienic choice and not everyone has this same desire.)
I enjoy how you created Krissy leave to go find the owner but to please the viewing eye, it would be enjoyable to see a hot side of your not so mundane looking Krissy and instead of sliding, she asks for seggs in return of not giving the 6 Mililitre sperm jug which is also a continuation of the theme milk (6 Mililitre milk, Krissy's milk jugs e.t.c). Another amazing idea to insert into the scene would be the sex worker asking weather or not they should as they could be fired witch makes the instance of the owner walking in so insane. With all told this script would be an fantasy idea and I would hate to see this mp4 drown.
EZPZ | BabaJR0 27. srp. 2021 v 5.25 
10/10 script. Personally I'd say it's just a matter of how you would mimic the scene and environment of a shopping centre or gas station. As a pornography enthusiast it is nice to have an authentic feeling to a video and experience it whilst ejaculating as if it was possible to happen in real life (this is a personal choice and not everyone has this same fetish.)
I like how you made Karen leave to go find the manager but to please the viewing eye, it would be appealing to see a spicy side of your not so typical looking Karen and instead of slipping, she asks for sex in return of not supplying the 2 Litre milk jug which is also a continuation of the theme milk (2 Litre milk, Karen's milk jugs e.t.c). Another fantastic idea to implement into the scene could be the worker questioning whether or not he should as he could get fired which makes the moment of the manager walking in so intense. With all said this script would be an amazing idea and I would love to see this video surface.