Pretty solid as for the first run, really! Remember not to give up, MHW is not a game that will be generous to you if you don't put enough effort into it. As for the last jump, you shouldn't have run away so much. Try to stay close because it gives you more time to jump. The jump you executed was done too early (0.2-3 sec too early to be exact). Far distance = less time and must be executed pretty late, hope that helps. :p