gg's man. Your Drag isn't bad, you just need more in the toolkit. Your adaptations were pretty spot on. If ya want a good NA Drag to get some ideas off of, I suggest Fear_of_Silence outta NY. Homie's a murderer on Drag n will give ya some good ideas as to what to do.

kind of a bot -rep

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+rep, nice and fast trader