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Glorious M e l o n 12 May, 2018 @ 4:42pm
The Molten Curse
Molten Freddy awoke from his de-activation only to see the maze that locked him inside the pizzeria was covered in flames with him burning. He picked himself up even with him literally being on fire.

"I....still-l....need...to...fin-d....him......" The robotic bear said. "And-d....pay-y him...back...for his genero-us....deeds...an-d...d...for this cur-se...."

He slithered through the maze quickly to find his creator. He knew he did have much time before the fire would finish all of them off. He rushed through another one of the rooms and saw a burning rusty, goldish green, robotic bunny burning. Molten Freddy thought nothing of it until the bunny's mask burned off, revealing his creator's skull.

"YOU-U.....MONSTER-R!" - Yelled Molten Freddy.

The sight of his creator brought back old, terrible memories of him and the other Funtime Animatronics being abused by Afton. From controlled shocks to being scooped, from the Clown forcing them to do things they didn't want to being forced to perform for children, Molten Freddy's rage at his creator only grew and grew as more memories flooded in. Finally, he jumped at Afton screaming at him.

"YOU WILL PAY-Y! HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE!" Molten Freddy said while ripping his creator's robotic tomb apart.

Piece by piece, limb by limb, Molten Freddy gave Afton the same treatment Afton gave the MCI's children all those years ago. Afton growled at him.

"STOP YOU STUPID PIECE OF JUNK! UGH! STOP! PLEASE STOP! CREATION! PLEASE STOP! I BEG OF YO-" William said in a cowardly voice, as Molten Freddy finished the job by tearing off Afton's head.

Molten Freddy stared at the lifeless skull for a minute while the fire consumed everything around him. Finally, he spoke.

"Years of suffering you've caused-d for all of u-US! HAHAHAHAHAH! But-t now....look at you-u! Gotten what you finally-y deserve-e-HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE!" - Said the vengeful bear.

He threw the decapitated skull into the fire and watched it burn along with the rest of Afton's body he forcefully teared apart and threw into the fire.

"Free from this CURSE-E....HAHAHAHAHAHAHA.....at last-t..." Molten Freddy said while the building started to collapse.

The end.
Last edited by Glorious M e l o n; 12 May, 2018 @ 7:01pm
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chuckster 12 May, 2018 @ 4:49pm 
this was actually pretty enjoyable

I like the portrayal of molten freddy, really gives him depth

only thing I didn’t really like was the enunciation of laughter (e.g. “hehehe”, etc.)
Last edited by chuckster; 12 May, 2018 @ 4:50pm
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Glorious M e l o n 12 May, 2018 @ 4:51pm 
Originally posted by Aubergine Scatman:
this was actually pretty enjoyable

I like the portrayal of molten freddy, really gives him depth
Thanks.
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Glorious M e l o n 12 May, 2018 @ 4:53pm 
Originally posted by Aubergine Scatman:
this was actually pretty enjoyable

I like the portrayal of molten freddy, really gives him depth

only thing I didn’t really like was the enunciation of laughter (e.g. “hehehe”, etc.)
Oh yeah, I kinda agree about the laughter part. I tried to make him sound like the soul and the robot were conflicting with each other but it didn't come out too well.
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Glorious M e l o n 12 May, 2018 @ 6:52pm 
Originally posted by Spark:
Geez, Molten Freddy is SAVAGE.
You get a little mad at the person who killed you and trapped your soul in a furry suit.
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Glorious M e l o n 12 May, 2018 @ 6:55pm 
Originally posted by Spark:
Originally posted by PopeWatermelonBadger:
You get a little mad at the person who killed you and trapped your soul in a furry suit.
Just uh, just a little mad.
Just a little mad. Just a tiny bit mad.

(also serious queston: Is this story good or not? Trying to find what i'm best at writing)
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Glorious M e l o n 12 May, 2018 @ 7:00pm 
Originally posted by Spark:
Originally posted by PopeWatermelonBadger:
Just a little mad. Just a tiny bit mad.

(also serious queston: Is this story good or not? Trying to find what i'm best at writing)
I think it's really awesome! You captured Molten Freddy really well! The only thing is that I think that William would angrily demand that Freddy stop before he started groveling.
Yeah I agree. Hold on let me edit it.
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Glorious M e l o n 12 May, 2018 @ 7:03pm 
Originally posted by PopeWatermelonBadger:
Originally posted by Spark:
I think it's really awesome! You captured Molten Freddy really well! The only thing is that I think that William would angrily demand that Freddy stop before he started groveling.
Yeah I agree. Hold on let me edit it.
Fixed it.
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