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Krupinski 12 Jan, 2016 @ 4:20pm
Hey I Guys if some can check my description for my game
Hey YOU Guys if someone can check my description for my game. It will be released on steam but at this moment my writing in english is not good so valve please me to correct my errors ( Simply i check them my self but i'm not native speaker so it is my problem because i don't know where i make mistake : ) below i put my description for my steam shop. Thank you so much for helping please Correct this if it not a problem ,I can translate your game in to polish languange if ypou will need my help .








Silver Knight

game description :

Silver Knight is a unique pseudo 2.5D Little-RPG game with randomized enemy spawn that offer a challenging new experience each time you play.
Any second can become your last in this dangerous place. You have to think twice before making another move - life are extremely hard to find.
Follow Knight on his journey and help him find his Princess.

Remember you must kill the Black Knight.



Key Features

- 30+ enemies, with lovely designs and different abilities.
- Over 5 bosses
- Rooms full of eggs and boxes
- Each time you play you get different enemies and bosses.
- Pixel blood every were.
- Secret shop where you can buy items for your Knight.
- Secret bosses.



Simply I making this game to serve you.

Join me my friend , and find your princess !!!

Developer
~ Wojciech Krupinski



Early Access Game

Why Early Access?

“Early Access will allow a player base to test and provide feedback to create much more polish game”

Approximately how long will this game be in Early Access?

“I give myself about 6 months to finish this game.”

How is the full version planned to differ from the Early Access version?

“I would like to make Silver Knight 2/3 much bigger. So what this mean ?
At this moment you can enter the "Spider Wing " the first wing .The finish game will have " Dragon Wing " and " Flower Wing " wings .Inside will be many types of enemies (over 50 + ) and more bosses (over 10 + )Fights.”

What is the current state of the Early Access version?

“The game is completely playable, all major features are implemented, everything works, there are no locked areas. There are no gamebreaking bugs. It might simply be lacking polish here and there.”

Will the game be priced differently during and after Early Access?

“Yes, the game will be lower priced through Early Access, relative to its final full-version retail price.”

How are you planning on involving the Community in your development process?

“Through direct forum engagement and quick iterative release cycles I aim for regular updates of game and progress.”


here you can see a trailer if you wish :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bm7Ur1jWciU


THANK YOU FOR YOUR HELP :steamhappy:








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EeuorT 12 Jan, 2016 @ 5:29pm 
Hello

"- life are" I think you mean "- lives are"
"- Rooms full of eggs and boxes" not sure eggs is the right word. I watched the video you posted here and didn't see any eggs.
"Simply I making" to "I'm simply making"
"So what this" to "So what's this"
"2/3 much bigger" to "2/3 bigger"
"much more polish" to "a much more polished"

Those were a quick few I would suggest. Hope it helps with what Valve asked you to do.
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Krupinski 13 Jan, 2016 @ 3:30am 
Hi EeuorT thank you so much for your help i just make correction < When game will be on steam i will send you a key >
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EeuorT 13 Jan, 2016 @ 10:23am 
Thank you for that. I'd appreciate it.
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.Saqrez 17 Jan, 2016 @ 8:48am 
Hi, you should also change the following:

"So what this mean" to "So what does this mean"

"the first wing .The finish game" the space before the . should be removed so: " the first wing. The finish game"

"Flower Wing " wings .Inside will be" The space should also be removed here so: "Flower Wing " wings. Inside will be"

"(over 50 + )" you should remove the space before ) so: "(over 50 +)"

"(over 10 + )" also here "(over 10 +)"

"gamebreaking" the words should be apart from each other "game breaking"

"Join me my friend , and find your princess !!!" should be "Join me my friend and find your princess!"

Those are all the corrections i could find.
Last edited by .Saqrez; 17 Jan, 2016 @ 9:20am
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.Saqrez 17 Jan, 2016 @ 9:08am 
I have also checked the recent updates of the game and i have also found a few suggestions there.

version 1.0.0.1
16 JANUARY - KRUPINSKI
Hi Guys I just make little update .

version 1.0.0.1

- At this moment xbox controler is turn off because of this (" Axis dead zone is outside the accepted range") i still working to fix this .

- Intro story now is much more correct ( if you still see any problems please write me )

PS. Today i will try to add next update.



*CHANGES*

"little update . " you should remove the . so " little update."

"controler" should be "controller"

"- At this moment xbox controler is turn off because of this " Should be "- At this moment xbox controller support is turned off because "

(" Axis dead zone is outside the accepted range") Should be without the space at the beginning of the sentence and the quotes should be changed to smart quotes so "(“Axis dead zone is outside the accepted range”)"

"i still working to fix this . " Should be with am after i and without the space before the . so "i am still working to fix this."

"( if you still see any problems please write me )" should be without the space at the beginning and at the end of the sentence so "(If you still see any problems please write me)"

"Today i will try" the i should be a capital letter so "Today I will try"
Last edited by .Saqrez; 17 Jan, 2016 @ 9:09am
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