Автор сообщения: Kryztal

Автор сообщения: robomagon

It's bad because it's bad. What makes it worse is I can tell from reading it that he could have done better with a little time and effort. Doing a half-assed job on something is IMHO much worse than just being bad at it, and as such I'll critique it harsher.

Автор сообщения: Panic

You are taking this too seriously...

And.

You don't know me and Ther, so no matter how much effort you put into the details and story, you'd never get it right.

so gl m9

Of course I don't. I've barely exchanged 50 words with you, and most of that was just a disagreement on the definition of furry. And I've never even seen Ther on here lot alone talked to him. None of that changes my ability to judge how well a fanfic is written.

Although Panic is right. I am taking this too seriously. Let's stop.

Автор сообщения: Kptn Howdy

Автор сообщения: タンク ファッカー

Not a lot.
Anyway, the game has barely anything to do with it, it's the fact that he's fucking forcing this shit.

I just kinda find the doom-forcing kind of annoying.




It's like the Undertale fans who keep telling you "you need to play UT its amazing play it play it"

You just don't want to play it just because the fans are plain annoying.

You do need to play UT and it is amazing. That's Unreal Tournament though, not Undertale.

Автор сообщения: Burnt Sienna

Автор сообщения: robomagon

Lolicon

Shotacon

Trap

Автор сообщения: Burnt Sienna

Автор сообщения: dino_inc

10 year olds

Pedophiles

Lolicon

Автор сообщения: タンク ファッカー

Автор сообщения: Erick

Pls, let's play this.
http://store.steampowered.com/app/2280/
http://store.steampowered.com/app/2300/

Jesus christ, fuck off.

Jesus Christ, do you like anything?

Автор сообщения: Kryztal

Автор сообщения: robomagon

Lame. He's supposed to be initiating her into womanhood. This needs foreplay, kissing, Colonel Angus, some tears during the initial penetration, and perhaps a blowjob scene where she starts to learn how to suppress her gag reflex. There's so much missing here that the bulk of the "story" just comes off as a lazy ham-fisted excuse to get the characters from point A to point B.

C-

>this is bad do as i say because i totally know these two people
lol stfu mate

It's bad because it's bad. What makes it worse is I can tell from reading it that he could have done better with a little time and effort. Doing a half-assed job on something is IMHO much worse than just being bad at it, and as such I'll critique it harsher.

Автор сообщения: Erick

Автор сообщения: robomagon

H-Doom?

Erm, no?

Hexen?

Автор сообщения: Erick

Everyone, forget this crappy game, let's all play Doom 1 and Doom 2 online.

H-Doom?

Awesome game. Probably the best game of its year. Would highly recommend.

Автор сообщения: タンク ファッカー

this is retarded

Stop being such a sourpuss.