Time to read Sonic.exe 2 three times.

I am looking for the light in all the cultures I can find.

Not currently.

Stake from Jate Farm lähetti viestin:

I'm reasonably good at dialouge.

I'm shit at explaining things.

Yep. That's the reason I can't even start.

dino_inc lähetti viestin:

Lots of details and good world building.

A'ight, I'll keep that in mind.

odd owen lähetti viestin:

a story can be plot driven or character driven in many cases
it's a good idea to flesh out the plot or characters
maybe both, but too much information can get in the way

Both noted.

Pepsiman! #WentInsane lähetti viestin:

Writing. A LOT

Not specifically, there's lots of short and sweet. Just turn to the Kürzgeschicte lane and you'll be off the road that to Feelztown or inspiration. It's quality over quantity.

Kryztal lähetti viestin:

Ninten' lähetti viestin:

Mary Sue? Like a "not Sonic" for example?

A Mary Sue is basically an unbalanced or overpowered character.

So, kind of like a super hero?

dino_inc lähetti viestin:

I absolutely abhor any kind of romance more than good friendships, stories tends to make everything revolve around that and it just becomes cringy because there's not many unique ways to spin it.

I can agree with that. They're extremely predictable as a side-story. As a good friendship on the other hand, a really good one. It can be quite interesting. You could avoid the tropes that'd make it romance and be okay. Or make it relatively creepy like Kafka's Metamorphosis.

It's the continuation of the other thread . It clears up some things.
So far we have this

Kryztal lähetti viestin:

Something that's interesting and is usually not written about.

Feel free to ask questions, as it makes us all the wiser.

odd owen lähetti viestin:

lets begin with something obvious, like a mary sue character
they are just painful to read about

Mary Sue? Like a "not Sonic" for example?