The Witch's Love Diary

The Witch's Love Diary

Slyvent 17 Nov, 2019 @ 3:55am
Confusing And Some Inconsistent VN i have read in longest time
Alright, I will get to the point real quick, keep in mind that i just want to rant about how this VN actually turn out and this is NOT SPOILER FREE!

In summary, IT'S CONFUSING

So we start up with a prologue where our main female character, Alice Nanno, found the witch love diary, it then recite the diary filled with a part of story when you start the real game(yada yada yada) with the prologue end where she remember our main male character, Sakurai Takumi

The story goes on to the so-called game start and the story progress on, I won't get into each heroine storyline and I'll just skip to the end

SPOILERS!

The ending is confusing because it didn't line up with how the "Prologue" should have ended where Alice Nano remember Sakurai Takumi and keep going to school without any so trouble, she even say she glad that Sakurai Takumi is here now with her.

The problem is, Alice Nanno ending route makes me confused and disappointed. Alice Nanno is somehow an "Old Granny" where she forgot Sakurai Takumi because Alys make a twist and make the story so called "eternal". Sure, I can accept that twist and it was quite do-able, the thing is, Alice Nanno ending is now an old lady who remember Sakurai Takumi, not Alice Nanno who glad that Sakurai Takumi is there with her in her school life.

You see the problem here?


Anyway, it just my opinion, but what do you guys think? I mean, overall is a good read, but you need to grind your gear (pun intended) to actually understand the story thoroughly and it still left you confused with some inconsistency
Last edited by Slyvent; 17 Nov, 2019 @ 3:57am