It definitely is an interesting story although at the end I was expecting some sort of ending, partial answers, something, that never came.

But most of all, it made me sad.

Maybe it's me being sensitive, or it's just about me having small kids, but having to go through the family's misfortunes just brought me down, for example having to send Calvin flying off the swing or especially having to make 1-year-old Gregory drown, those were actually hard to get through.

I did appreciate the originality of it overall, and I would've given it a sideways thumb if I didn't have to choose from only two options.

muy bonito

gud story