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caesar_ensalada 23 Mar, 2016 @ 6:20pm
Chinatsu's After Story?
I'm not crazy right?

The dialogue specifically said it was going to snow....

In May

In Japan

WHAT?!

It also said "Happy New Year"

Did y'all SERIOUSLY forget when the dialogue was suppose to take place???

I can tell you actually wrote this around January, and DIDN'T THINK to realize when it was suppose to place IN GAME! LOL

It even mentions the PC trying to spot Venus in the night sky.
Also by the way, I actually went to college for astronomy, and I can tell you, that you messed up on the appearances of Venus. Just my two cents there.


short edit* I just realized it was in June, not May.. Even so, my points stand even firmer.
After going through the after story via the menu option,
I believe the fault is that IF you meant for it to take place in the far future.
You forgot to DELETE the date from the after story while going through the route naturally in game.
Venus is also still messed up.

edit 2* Like I said on another post, all of the after stories are still greyed out, but I can click on them and activate them.
Last edited by caesar_ensalada; 23 Mar, 2016 @ 6:30pm
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Silegna 24 Mar, 2016 @ 5:42pm 
At least it's not full of Deus Ex Machina's like Shiro's...
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caesar_ensalada 25 Mar, 2016 @ 12:08pm 
Originally posted by Cyber God of Destruction:
At least it's not full of Deus Ex Machina's like Shiro's...

Oh my god....well this is what we get for trusting amateurs to be professional.


Know what else I just realized?
Chinatsu's story is almost a point for point rip off of the movie Susie Q.

(Spoilers!)

-Girl dies tragically by drowning at a bridge? Check
-Boy moves into a house with his widowed mother? Check
-Boy's father died in a car accident while trying to rush to get to the boy? Check
-Boy feels guilty over the accident leading to his character development? Check
-Boy meets girl at the bridge she drowned at? Check
-Girl comes to terms with life and leaves for the after life? Check

The only "subtle" difference here is that Susie technically loves the boy she died next to, and not the boy in the movie (but in Chinatsu's case, this still holds true).
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kandiiyuutaamu 10 Aug, 2016 @ 10:03am 
Originally posted by caesar_ensalada:
Originally posted by Cyber God of Destruction:
At least it's not full of Deus Ex Machina's like Shiro's...

Oh my god....well this is what we get for trusting amateurs to be professional.


Know what else I just realized?
Chinatsu's story is almost a point for point rip off of the movie Susie Q.

(Spoilers!)

-Girl dies tragically by drowning at a bridge? Check
-Boy moves into a house with his widowed mother? Check
-Boy's father died in a car accident while trying to rush to get to the boy? Check
-Boy feels guilty over the accident leading to his character development? Check
-Boy meets girl at the bridge she drowned at? Check
-Girl comes to terms with life and leaves for the after life? Check

The only "subtle" difference here is that Susie technically loves the boy she died next to, and not the boy in the movie (but in Chinatsu's case, this still holds true).
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kandiiyuutaamu 10 Aug, 2016 @ 10:10am 
Why is this surprising? I mean, there are so many games that have been released which involves numerous characters to have almost exactly or somewhat similar stories despite the difference in genres. So if one is saying that a game is a rip-off to another game, you might as well say that a lot or all of the existing games are complete rip-offs to each other. And no don't try to convince me is it not otherwise. :steamfacepalm:
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caesar_ensalada 10 Aug, 2016 @ 11:06pm 
Originally posted by kandiiyuutaamu:
Why is this surprising? I mean, there are so many games that have been released which involves numerous characters to have almost exactly or somewhat similar stories despite the difference in genres. So if one is saying that a game is a rip-off to another game, you might as well say that a lot or all of the existing games are complete rip-offs to each other. And no don't try to convince me is it not otherwise. :steamfacepalm:

Who said anything about surprising?
I just think it's a blatant ripoff by an amateur writer.
Arguably a ripoff that doesn't even fall under fair use
if the original creator was made aware,
but I'm not that cruel.
Unwonted barely even has a penny to its name in the grand scheme of things.

Whatever point you're trying to make is lost on me. You're rather erratic in your discussion, not even mentioning the grammar I had to parse.
I don't think you even brought up an acutal counterpoint to the statements I made. If you misunderstood my meaning or visa versa then I apologize, but you went off on a bit of a tangent from the original discussion. xD
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