Puzzles were decent... game looked good... but overall the story was a swing and a miss. I almost feel like you made this game to put mannequins in "positions" because they hurt you in horror games in the past before. Because for one... no "horror" game that's supposed to tell a story should be over so quickly... especially if you're trying to connect it to the protagonist in the way you tried to "wrap it up" at the end. Think of "MADiSON" and "Visage" when it comes to connecting the character to the story... you didn't even give a short story comparison here... you gave a haiku. Yes your assets look nice... you did a pretty good job laying them out... but your story telling... that needs the bulk of the work.