Edge Of Eternity

Edge Of Eternity

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M. Doucet 14 Jun, 2021 @ 8:12am
Typos / Text Corrections
A thread for typos/incorrect text. I will update this list as this thread is commented on. It is sorted alphabetically, so please use it FIRST to make sure your submission hasn't already been reported.

Please include the original text and correction, the speaker/item name, and the language your game is set to. Example:

Daryon (English)
"I didn't sign for anything!" →
"I didn't sign up for anything!"

General Formatting
There are many instances of inconsistent or inaccurate formatting.
  • Apostrophes & Quotation Marks: Quotation marks and apostrophes should use consistent symbols. The easiest fix is to replace all instances of “‟”«» with " and ‘‛’‹› with '
  • Emphasis: Formatting for emphasis should be consistent. Because dialogues support bold, italicized and underlined text, instances of ALL CAPS or text in *asterisks* should be replaced by appropriate formatting
  • Dashes & Hyphens: Dashes and hyphens are in need of consistency. Some dialogues are broken up by hyphens -- to indicate a parenthetical or interruption -- when they should use a dash instead. Other instances incorrectly use dashes in place of hyphens (reference[en.wikipedia.org])
  • Ending Punctuation: For consistency there should never be a space before normal ending punctuation (,?!.). Additionally, these same marks should generally come before ending quotation marks (".") instead of after them ("".)
  • God/Goddess/Gods: Normally, none of these words should be capitalized (eg. "Roman gods" or "god of thunder") unless beginning a sentence or referring specifically to a name (eg. "I'm praying to God" or "praise to Allah"), but it's dealer's choice in a fantasy setting. Pronouns (he/her/him/she/them/they) should arguably never be capitalized in a setting with multiple gods (reference[www.englishgrammar101.com])

Main Characters
Daryon
"Actually, there is are."

"And when they get close to you--when they have fought an uphill battle for a chance to strike back at you. Greet them with more explosives." →
"And when they get close to you--when they have fought an uphill battle for a chance to strike back--you greet them with more explosives."

"But if it ceased to be a threat to the Archelites... If it was destroyed. destroyed, then the Archelites would have no reason to bomb Astrya, right?" (changed misplaced period to comma)

FR: "Car Or un beau jour" (Thank you All Zebest!)

"Don't you have any kind of law enforcement here in Tyr-Caelum, someone whose job is to take care of these this kind of problem?"

"Hey, you didn't say a word about that! I thought we were looking for a treasure, not after a fight!"

"How are we gonna get through this?"

"I kept learning to use it and killed my first monster. That made me feel pretty confidant confident."

"I mean, a household, a family it's is the kind of thing everyone wants, right?"

"It's always eleven, with you!"

"Listen *intends to speak, cuts himself off with a slight grunt, then changes track* all that matters to me is saving Mom, Selene. And keeping you safe. I don't care about the other stuff." (asterisks are not generally used in this game to describe action. The conversation this example is from does it liberally, but it is the only dialogue to do so by this point in the game)

"Mind if I check inside anyway?"

"Of course, I'm worried, Selene."

"One reason is that I was fed up of doing what I'm about to do now."

""Scream Screams of pain"? But what is this ritual, exactly!?"

"So, help me out figure out what old Rudolph's last supper was? was."

"There's no leader. We are just taking make decisions all together."

"Those are quite gruesome. Are you sure they won't break when we use them?" →
"So I'm the only one without a corroded weapon, huh? Can't say that I'm thrilled with this vote of confidence." (Correction matches the voiceover)

FR: "Tout celle de notre mère. Où trouverons-nous ton mentor ?"

"You never question yourself, Myrna. And you go around spreading lies like their they're facts to whoever's buying."

"You really gave me the creeps back there, you there. You acted just like mom Mom."

Fallon
"Fallon Transmitter : (Static Noise)" (This is one example of several transmitter sounds incorrectly attributed to Fallon. Furthermore, all of Fallon's actual lines in the same cutscene are in quotes despite nobody being quoted.)

"And a lot of the machines they used was were broken during the fight. So I thought "heh, thought, "Heh, Fallon, time to make a pretty penny", go scavenging."

"But he still got had the stigmas, right?"

"But I was really in a pickle at that precise moment - I burned my last resources in the trip from Olympia to Astrya and I really - *really* really, *really* needed that money."

"Him first, for being such a jerk prick, and then *you* for being such a pathetic loser!" (Correction matches the voiceover)

"I didn't sign up for anything!"

"I know what the Sanctorium stands for. Bunch of hypocritical, sanctimonious punks who believe that because they can speak to the Gods, everyone should dance to their tunes tune."

"Long story short, you gotta find another way to Avaris, rusty, aunt Aunt Fallon' can't help you this time." (reference[www.grammarbook.com])

"So, I drop dropped the bomb on them. 1.000.000 1,000,000 Heyrs. Every time you try to argue, price'll go up by a hundred thousand." (correction consistent with other dialogue)

"So, I should've just taken Ysoris, healed brought him back to health, transported him somewhere for free - so that other people may could find a cure and get to fatten their pockets by selling the Cure it? No way."

"So, it was St- St. Zargon's night."

"So, they take them him into their lab, plug wires into him."

"The geezers are looking at me like as if interrupting their meeting was some kind of grave offense and I repeat : "This guy is the only known person to have survived the Corrosion - so I expect you to pay me for this guy's what he's worth."

Selene
"And we need all the good and strongwill strength and good will we can find."

"Good as if All the same. You just said the words that I needed to hear. I am glad you are with us."

"I explain them how it works beforehand. Who do you take me for? Some kind of sadist?"

"Oh... So this that's how you think we work? What would you do in my stead place, then?" (VO uses the word "place" instead of "stead")

"Only a select few will survive the ordeal. A millennium of dreams will pass for them-on them. On their awakening, they will be free. And life on Heryon will flourish... again."

"So, burrowers actually exists exist. What are they anyway?"

"The crystals Crystals are Home to the Gods, The Sanctorium is Home to the Crystals<endline>
Bow down as you walk the threshold, for who is without reverence for their inner self<endline>
Deserves no Love." (Also removed period at the end. Should "love" be capitalized?)

"The engravings are written in old Vanati. I could deCypher decipher them for you..." (*see note at the end of this post)

"Then, let's go, fearless leader!"

"These tendrils are a problem. Let's follow that big root, right there. I'm pretty sure it will lead us to the energy source, and we can destroy it."

"We'll deCypher decipher the headstones. We will tell you what transpires." (*see note at the end of this post)

"What kind of magic was this? Did the Elders explained explain why they cursed you so?"

"Wouldn't it work just as well if it was... I don't know... the “bloodthirsty monster technique”?" (too many double quotes)

"You're bringing the matter it up because..."

Ysoris
"A few months after, the Cyphers realized they couldn't synthetize any synthesize a cure to the Corrosion."

"Being worth 1.7 million Heyrs was the icing on the top."

"Documented? And by who whom?"

"Hey, Echo, is that it true what they say? That you accidentally locked yourself inside the reactor?"

"Huh-huh Uh-huh."

"I'm starting to see a trend, there trend here."

"I travelled traveled the world looking for a cure, remember? On my travels, I met several people like him. Oddballs, goobers, living in Clockwork Fields like this one. And they were all healthy! Provided they can could fend off the occasional corroded creature, of course." (Correction matches the voiceover)

"It was nice being fought over, after all this time. Having value for someone - even if it was just a price tag attached."

"I've been kicked out from everyplace every place, banned from my city, of from my family." (possibly "disowned by")

"*koff cough*"

"Now, now. You can't just take a barely sober bum and put him in a position of responsibility like that!"

"Oh boy. I might take you up on your offer to break my jaw, it'll jaw. It'll be less painful if you're doing it rather than him."

"Oh, I'm sure I can sink lower just lower. Just watch me."

FR: "Sinon vous lui pouvez toujours lui offrir mon ancien repaire et tourner la page."

"Talk about having a rotten luck."

"The meteor is still there, alright all right. In all of its glorious stillness. I've seen it with my own two, (sober), eyes. They even put a little mausoleum there, so that pilgrims can waste money."

"Those weapons are just like me, Daryon : Daryon: ugly. They make you feel uncomfortable... and yet they will ultimately serve you well."

"The word is that at the last test runs, run he got locked inside. By the time someone realized it, the reactor was already igniting."

"Was it now? I've not been long with the both of you I haven't been with both of you long, but still enough to understand who is calling calls the shots, here." (correction more closely matches VO which changes word order but reads better)

"We can take a few step backs steps back if you need some privacy."

"We need transport to Avaris, Fallon, and the people I'm with are ready to grace grease your palm with all their life savings!" (reference[www.google.com])

"Why do you guys ever even listen to me?" (Correction matches the voiceover)

"Yes, and it will cost you an arm and a leg."

Other Characters
Aldorn
"Quickly! Get this bracelet out of my sight!" (Aldorn is speaking, but this text is incorrectly attributed to Atalanta)

Alno
"Didn't Don't you get it yet? There's no treasure."

Alpharis
"In the meanwhile meantime, take this. I found it while foraging for a few mushrooms in a damp corner of the cathedral."

"Just like the ebb of the tide, the rhythm of the moons, the sun... it comes and goes. Gods sometimes enter stages of lethargy, and magic slumbers with Them them." (per General Formatting above, they/them referring to gods should not be capitalized)

"Well, as long as we don't hear any scream screams of pain, she should be okay."

Ancestral Croctas
"Our kind can learn to speak your language of deceipt deceit." (Thank you Siemova!)

"Trees weep in at your passage." (Thank you Siemova!)

Apprentice Apothecary
"There They are, not too far from here, I'll point it out on your map."

Chief Mechanic
"There's something different about you. You've got the look of someone who's finally decided to pull his face head out of his butt." (correction matches VO)

Cipher
"Early morning, I come here to drink my cup of Root-Sailor. It's really inspiring, you know, seeing all these people getting up early and get going to work."

Consort Soldier
"Daryon XXX, and Selene XXX? You and your companions are under arrest at the decree of the Consort." →
"Looks like our intel was correct. You there! The priestess, the rest of your cohort, as well as yourself, are now in the Consort's custody. Deserter." (Correction matches the voiceover)

Crow
EN: [Japanese text instead of English]

"Let me go over the rules, because a freshener refresher is always welcome. If you pay us, we'll hide a chest around here with some cool, premium stuff inside."

Draren
"Huh, Ysoris? So, the rumors about you becoming a Sanctorium lapdog, are they true then?"

Echo
"At On one condition."

Forager
"Small robots. They should skedaddle the moment you step into onto the same platform."

"You improvise. Or you try to scare one of those damn scamper scampers so that he can conduct the current where you want it to go."

Gavin
"I still enjoy working with you, make no mistake, but your anger is a bad counsellor counselor." (reference[grammarist.com])

Griff
"Don't play "big brother" on with me, ashbag! I have a name and it's Griff!"

"I'll... urgh... sleep it over off and I'll be fine..."

Heranna
FR: "Je t'avais dit que je tu tomberais avec moi !" (Il y a un "je" en trop.)

Herelsor Official
"Herelsor has had... a criminality problem in the past. Theft mainly.<endline> But the problem is largely confined to... certain fringes of the population. It's a problem that solves itself with every round of conscription."

Huntress
"Good for you, then. It's not everyday every day you meet that kind of priest around here."

"I found this sweet girl the other day, fighting for her life against a pack of Croctas. I came to her aid.<endline> She's been tagging along ever since. She's a wild Nekaroo, so she'll probably split at some point... but she hasn't yet."

Juli
"No need, Selene. You are doing what you must, and just as surely as you, we will do our part."

Karadin
(I missed screenshots and the exact quotes, but at least two of Karadin's lines after the battle when banishing Alno from the village are incorrectly attributed to Alno.)

Logram
"We have do... But all of my complaints and testimonies are falling fall on deaf ears."

Man
"Chief isn't there here. Spoke with a few colleagues: he darted off somewhere."

Massimo
"See, if I tell you where he is and he knows it, I'll be in for the whopping whooping of my life." (Correction matches the voiceover)

"To be honest, I'm not sure there was a password. There probably was at some point, but I *think * *think* Alpharius decided to do without, then ultimately changed his mind and then again, and I lost track somewhere."

Master Apothecary
"See, there's they're even listening to us right here."

Nameless Swordswoman
"Your swings are sloppy. You're not fighting, you're swatting left and right, like a man fending off a giant mosquito."" (Unneeded double quote at the end)

Ormund the Storyteller
"Believe it or not, I've been doing nothing *but* talking about Cyrus up 'till till now."

"But whether he liked it or not, he had no solution on how to advert avert the cataclysm. So, he... decided to pray."

"Fair enough. But what does this precept tells tell us about people who spends spend most of their days on the road, or in the wilderness? People without a home?"

"He used it as a pretext to genocide [exterminate/massacre/slaughter] several of the nomad tribes that wouldn't acknowledge his rule." (Reference[english.stackexchange.com])

"I sure hope you want to hear a long story? Because story, because I got one hell of a spiel coming on."

"That would be the first time I'd hear I heard of it."

"<i>The sanctorium Sanctorium is Home to the Gods and their Holy Spirits</i>"

"There's There are actually four continents, but we'll get to that later. Or maybe not. You don't look like the sharpest tool in the shed, and that lesson would probably be wasted on you."

"To this day, everyone still sees us as a potential danger. And we are strongly encouraged to keep our stay inside every cities to a minimum... *If* we are allowed entry at *all.* *at all.*"

"What do you think, clever boy? That I was reeling in ecstasy the day they dragged me to the brazier and branded me this mark on my forehead!?"

Ragna the Alchemist
"Who were you, already are you again? Ah! The Crimsonblooms!"

Refugee
"Some says say the Archelites sabotaged the ArchLight and caused the explosion."

"We are tired. But we still must must still go on."

Scavenger
"We're deserters. Most of us fled the city before the conscription. Some of us deserted the army before they we got killed. In the end, it doesn't matter much. We're all dead meat if the Consort gets us."

Skeil
"He went everyday every day to drink a glass of it, right in front of their eyes, to show it was safe."

Spunta
"Being the pushover that I am, I couldn't help picking him up and dressing his wounds."

Storyteller
"That is why -- though -- heretic by law, the Cyphers are worthy of all praise." ->
"That is why -- though heretic by law -- the Cyphers are worthy of all praise."

Technobandit
"First we came to Tyr-Caelum to salvage weapons... Then we stayed because we just have found some a way of living."

Tradesman
This Herelsor NPC has some issues. One of the name badges is missing during this conversation (not sure who is speaking) above: "Tell me more about it. How does it work?" Later in the same dialogue, cutscene-style text that says "Where's your proof?" shows up behind the dialogue box that says, "I don't know. It just does!" (screenshots[imgur.com])

Traveler
"It is. But the new owners haven't showed shown up yet. They will be bringing the Nekaroos. Come back in a while."

Troy
"Well, the other day she passed through our camp in her cart, kicked out two bandits she'd captured, and gave us the scolding of our lives."

Voice
(Note: Most of the "Voice" lines are speech corrections for the English voiceover. Of particular note is that Voice pronounces "Archelites" differently than other VOs)

"Ghost? No, not really. I was made by those you call, Archelites. I'm more of a golem-thing. I believe that is what you call an automaton ["automation" used in English VO] in these parts." (may require VO update)

"This is the restroom. I felt it wouldn't be fair on to our intruders not to have one. Everyone needs a little rest." (may require VO update)

"Well, you ask asked me! I'm trying to explain why I'm forced to kill you!" (may require VO update)

"You prevailed. Good. Do you see the blue big eye on the wall over there? That's where my central unit is installed. That's the true me." (not only is the object being referred to not blue, the English voiceover also says "big eye")

Wounded Lieutenant
"There were a handful, at first. A few of those blasted automatons here and there, lurking around the village at night like hungry croctas."

Yahaga
"I can promise him a clean bed and three meals everyday every day / a day -- but he must be ready to work for it."

Ykran
"Some of us live here because they we refused to become Tyr-Caelum's indendtured servants. Others because they wanted to leave Archelite technology behind them."

Zellis
"Whoop-dee-doo. Didn't we all went go there, fellas?"

Items
Ambrosia Reed
"A quasi-mythical substance. Grows only on the floating farms around Herelsor. Undescriptible Indescribable taste."

Ardens-Lazuli
"A beautiful gemstone harboring an alluring red hue. Some people have claimed falling with in love with it - and died alone, without regrets."

Blue Fluid
"Harvested on in the nick of time. A precious liquid."

Breathing Ivy
"A string of heavy ivy that seems to be breathing - a false impression : the ivy whrite writhes because of sudden temperature fluctuations."

Crocta Fang
"The fang that came out of a Crocta's back-mouth. Some hunter hunters say they can eat their prey from either mouth."

Crocta Jaw
"A crocta's jaw. Large enough to fit in the head heads of four full-grown humanoids."

Dorsal Tongue
"Croctas are often found roaming in forest forests - and nearby cities. Legends say they use their human-like tongue to lure humans their way."

Dark Seed
"Contrary to the name indicates, these are not seeds but incredibly small, hard mushrooms who that only grow in the dark. Evaporate when put under the sunlight."

Diluted Memory
"The dregs of a spectral monster, gathered in the Solna plains Plains - For reasons unknown, the Junion lake Lake is a beacon for the souls of deceased monsters. The life of a monster is a turmoil of emotions they don't have necessarily the time, wisdom or intellect to comprehend - still, they occasionnally occasionally leave an imprint of what was their existence."

Dream Essence
"The essence of a spectral monster itself, gathered in the Solna Plains. Scholar Scholars would argue that the difference between monsters, animals and humans are the presence of a soul. Is this the evidence that they are wrong?"

Dying Crystal
"<Empty>" (Screenshot[imgur.com]; should have appropriate text)

Essence of Despair
"A dangerous substance, often used as a poison in commercial negociations negotiations and political intrigues to produce chaotic outcomes. Illegal in all City-State City-States around Astrya."

Essence of Hatred
"A dangerous substance, often used as a poison in commercial negociations negotiations and political intrigues to produce chaotic outcomes. Illegal in all City-State City-States around Astrya."

Glowshroom
Missing text description

Gurrn Knuckle
"The knuckle of a Gurrn, which has resisted the many blow blows it has endured in combat."

Homonculium
"A strange mineral which sometimes takes on humanoïd humanoid form. Doesn't scream when it's pulled off the ground."

Karandu [Headband/Robe]
The names of the Karandu Headband and Robe are swapped and do not match their respective icons and slots

Klaysha [Feet/Hands/Helmet/Legs/Torso]
All Klaysha armor items are using the same (head) icon

Morom Nacre
"Remains of half-digested crystals have formed this strange composite - which will surely be useful for something."

Morom Nucleus
"Some of the crystal ingested by the Moroms don't doesn't get digested, and concentrates in this peculiar nucleus, which conserves some of the crystal's miraculous properties."

Orokko Trap
"A cruel mechanical trap who that triggers when someone steps on it. Causes bleeding."

Sharp Knives
"Give Gives a 37%There is a chance to cast a spell corresponding to the element of the crystal inserted in the character's weapon when the character is attacked. Removes spells embedded in the crystal."

Singing Orchid
"A strange plant that - under the right conditions - can produce different kind kinds of high-pitched noise noises."

Skittan Tail
"Hidden in this tail lies a an incredibly supple, yet resilient membranbe membrane, which boast boasts many uses. Some monsterologists theorizes theorize that Skittans spent spend a lot of time biting their own tail, which would explain why it would eventually get gets so sturdy."

Stillpoppies
Missing text description

Tantalium Grey
"Single mineral which eats light away. Often put on nightstands to insure ensure a good night's sleep."

Threstrorn
"A seeping root, which transform transforms the ambiant ambient humidity into a thick substance."

Titanium Scrap
"The fragment of an Archelite warmachine war machine dismantled near Tyr-Caelum. Titanium is still a novelty en in Heryon, and but a few people, safe save for the Technomages, dares dare to experiment upon with it."

Ur-Dunnrir's Horn
"This horn usually remains deeply buried in the dunnrir's skull. It only starts growing out once the cervidea survive a traumatic event - usually a violent death of kin. Eventually, the dunnrir grows into a an Ur-dunnrir."

Variscitium
"Not so much as an actual gemstone, this is the solidified mucus of a an insectivore monster, injected - then forgotten - into an anthill."

Worldroot
"A small piece of an incredibly long root which has formed around all of Heryon during the past millenias millennia, forming one single, giant network of roots." (Reference[grammarist.com]: The plural of 'millennium' is 'millennia' or 'millenniums')

UI/Tooltips
2021-07-03 ENG
"Ysoris needs energy to power his prosthetics and use his skills
." (Unneeded newline before period)

2021-07-06 ENG
If one of the options is unavailable in dialogues requiring a choice (eg. https://imgur.com/a/lWjebEx), the unavailable option is typeset in red which makes it very difficult to read.

Subtitle text appears behind location labels in cutscenes (eg. https://imgur.com/a/WjAH9zd

2021-07-11 ENG
Nightwing Reaper Tooltip: Text description is scaled too small. Item icon is also really pixelated (https://imgur.com/a/FQQNAoh)

2021-08-31 ENG
On world map, "Mount Ardheim" should say "Mount Berenroth"

* An NPC called Storyteller in Tyr-Caelum uses the term "deciphering" explicitly. If Selene's use of the word "deCypher" is deliberate, that Storyteller's dialogue should be updated instead for consistency.
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M. Doucet 15 Jun, 2021 @ 8:12pm 
2021-06-15 ENG
https://imgur.com/a/cfb1CjP

"I explain them how it works..." →
"I explain [] how it works..."

"...Large enough to fit in the head of four full-grown humanoids." →
"...Large enough to fit [] the [heads] of four full-grown humanoids."

"There are, not too far from here..." →
"[They] are not too far from here..."

"...on how to advert the cataclysm..." →
"...on how to [avert] the cataclysm..."

"So, burrowers actually exists..." →
"So, burrowers actually [exist]..."

"...But the new owners haven't showed up yet..." →
"...But the new owners haven't [shown] up yet..."

"Mind if check inside anyway?" →
"Mind if check inside anyway?"
Last edited by M. Doucet; 20 Jun, 2021 @ 7:09am
marsHm311oW 15 Jun, 2021 @ 9:08pm 
I really dont know what they done in the whole EA phase. I could do the same for the german language but its just to much. Nearly every sentence feels wrong.
banditbandit 16 Jun, 2021 @ 3:58am 
What does mean!

https://gtm.steamproxy.vip/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2518334587

J'avoue, je ne comprends pas le sens de ce texte...
M. Doucet 17 Jun, 2021 @ 3:35pm 
2021-06-17 ENG
https://imgur.com/a/NFx4CSW

"Who were you already?..." →
"Who [are] you, already?..."

"...That made me feel pretty confidant." →
"...That made me feel pretty [confident]."

"...spreading lies like their facts..." →
"...spreading lies like [they're] facts..."

"...figure out what did Rudolph's last supper was?" →
"...figure out what [Rudolph's] last supper was[.]"

"...I was fed up of doing..." →
"...I was fed up doing..."

"...Did the Elders explained why..." →
"...Did the Elders [explain] why..."
M. Doucet 20 Jun, 2021 @ 7:03am 
2021-06-19 ENG
https://imgur.com/a/WjG9h86

"...couldn't help picking him and dressing his wounds." →
"...couldn't help picking him [up] and dressing his wounds."

"A string of heavy that seems to be breathing - a false impression: the ivy whrite because of sudden temperature fluctuations." →
"A string of heavy [ivy] that seems to be breathing - a false impression: the ivy [writhes] because of sudden temperature fluctuations."
M. Doucet 1 Jul, 2021 @ 10:30am 
2021-07-01 ENG

"Quickly! Get this bracelet out of my sight!" → Spoken by ALDORN but the dialogue says ATALANTA.

I missed screenshots and the exact quotes, but at least two of Karadin's lines after the battle when banishing Alno from the village are incorrectly attributed to Alno.

"He went everyday to drink a glass of it..." →
"He went every day to drink a glass of it..."

"Some of us live here because they refused..." →
"Some of us live here because [we] refused..."

"There's actually four continents..." →
"There are actually four continents..."

"We are tired. But we still must go on." →
"We are tired. But we must still go on."

"...because a freshener is always welcome..." →
"...because a refresher is always welcome..."

"...because we just have found some way of living." →
"...because we found a way of living."
banditbandit 2 Jul, 2021 @ 2:39am 
There is "lui" two times. En français : "Sinon vous lui pouvez toujours lui...", le premier "lui" est de trop.


https://gtm.steamproxy.vip/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2534439562
M. Doucet 2 Jul, 2021 @ 2:08pm 
2021-07-02 ENG

"Don't play "big brother" on me, ashbag!..." →
"Don't play "big brother" with me, ashbag!..."

"I'll... urgh... sleep it over and I'll be fine..." →
"I'll... urgh... sleep it off and I'll be fine..."

"...I thought we were looking for a treasure, not after a fight!" →
"...I thought we were looking for a treasure, not a fight!"

"Didn't you get it yet?..." →
"Don't you get it?..."
M. Doucet 3 Jul, 2021 @ 1:55pm 
2021-07-03 ENG

"At one condition." →
"On one condition."

"That is why -- though -- heretic by law, the Cyphers are worthy of all praise." →
"That is why -- though heretic by law -- the Cyphers are worthy of all praise."

"...these kind of problem?" →
"...this kind of problem?"

"We have... But all of my complaints and testimonies are falling on deaf ears." →
"We do... But all of my complaints and testimonies fall on deaf ears."

"...getting up early and get to work." →
"...getting up early and going to work."

"How are gonna get through this?" →
"How are we gonna get through this?"

"...one of those damn scamper..." →
"...one of those damn scampers..."

"...you step into the same platform." →
"...you step onto the same platform."

"...We are just taking decisions all together." →
"...We are just making decisions together."

"Hey, Echo, is that true what they say?..." →
"Hey, Echo, is it true what they say?..."

UI: One of the dialogues in Ysoris' tutorial has an unneeded newline before the period at the end:
"Ysoris needs energy to power his prosthetics and use his skills
."
M. Doucet 6 Jul, 2021 @ 7:36am 
2021-07-06 ENG

"...back there, you acted just like mom." →
"...back there. You acted just like Mom."

"The word is that at the last test runs..." →
"The word is that at the last test run..."

"...and three meals everyday..." →
"...and three meals every day..."

"...Didn't we all went there, fellas?" →
"...Didn't we all go there, fellas?"

UI
If one of the options is unavailable in dialogues requiring a choice (eg. https://imgur.com/a/lWjebEx), the unavailable option is typeset in red which makes it very difficult to read.

Subtitle text appears behind location labels in cutscenes (eg. https://imgur.com/a/WjAH9zd
Last edited by M. Doucet; 6 Jul, 2021 @ 7:45am
M. Doucet 11 Jul, 2021 @ 10:34am 
2021-07-11 ENG

Main Characters
Daryon
"It's always eleven, with you!" →
"It's always eleven with you!"

Items
Diluted Memory
"The dregs of a spectral monster, gathered in the Solna plains - For reasons unknown, the Junion lake is a beacon for the souls of deceased monsters. The life of a monster is a turmoil of emotions they don't have necessarily the time, wisdom or intellect to comprehend - still, they occasionnally leave an imprint of what was their existence." →
"The dregs of a spectral monster, gathered in the Solna Plains. For reasons unknown, the Junion Lake is a beacon for the souls of deceased monsters. The life of a monster is a turmoil of emotions they don't have the time, wisdom or intellect to comprehend - still, they occasionally leave an imprint of what was their existence."

Dream Essence
"The essence of a spectral monster itself, gathered in the Solna Plains. Scholar would argue that the difference between monsters, animals and humans are the presence of a soul. Is this the evidence that they are wrong?" →
"The essence of a spectral monster itself, gathered in the Solna Plains. Scholars would argue that the difference between monsters, animals and humans are the presence of a soul. Is this the evidence that they are wrong?"

Dying Crystal
"<Empty>" →
(Screenshot[imgur.com]; should have appropriate text)

Essence of Hatred
"A dangerous substance, often used as poison in commercial negociations and political intrigues to produce chaotic outcomes. Illegal in all City-State around Astrya." →
"A dangerous substance, often used as poison in commercial negotiations and political intrigues to produce chaotic outcomes. Illegal in all City-States around Astrya."

UI
Nightwing Reaper tooltip: Text description is scaled too small. Item icon is also really pixelated (https://imgur.com/a/FQQNAoh)
Last edited by M. Doucet; 11 Jul, 2021 @ 1:41pm
M. Doucet 12 Jul, 2021 @ 10:03am 
Main Characters
Daryon
"Actually, there is." →
"Actually, there are."

"I mean, a household, a family it's the kind of thing everyone wants, right?" →
"I mean, a household, a family is the kind of thing everyone wants, right?"

Selene
"The crystals are Home to the Gods, The Sanctorium is Home to the Crystals<endline> Bow down as you walk the threshold, for who is without reverence for their inner self<endline> Deserves no Love." →
"The crystals are Home to the Gods, The Sanctorium is Home to the Crystals
Bow down as you walk the threshold, for who is without reverence for their inner self
Deserves no Love" (Also removed period at the end. Should "love" be capitalized?)

Other Characters
Ormund The Storyteller
"Believe it or not, I've been doing nothing *but* talking about Cyrus up 'till now." →
"Believe it or not, I've been doing nothing *but* talking about Cyrus up till now."

"Fair enough. But what does this precept tells us about people who spends most of their days on the road, or in the wilderness? People without a home?" →
"Fair enough. But what does this precept tell us about people who spend most of their days on the road, or in the wilderness? People without a home?"

"He used it as a pretext to genocide several of the nomad tribes that wouldn't acknowledge his rule." →
"He used it as a pretext to [exterminate/massacre/slaughter] several of the nomad tribes that wouldn't acknowledge his rule." (Reference[english.stackexchange.com])

"I sure hope you want to hear a long story? Because I got one hell of a spiel coming on." →
"I sure hope you want to hear a long story, because I got one hell of a spiel coming on."

"That would be the first time I'd hear of it." →
"That would be the first time I heard of it."

"<i>The sanctorium is Home to the Gods and their Holy Spirits</i>" →
"The Sanctorium is Home to the Gods and their Holy Spirits"

"To this day, everyone still sees us as a potential danger. And we are strongly encouraged to keep our stay inside every cities to a minimum... *If* we are allowed entry at *all.*" →
"To this day, everyone still sees us as a potential danger. And we are strongly encouraged to keep our stay inside cities to a minimum... *If* we are allowed entry *at all.*"

"What do you think, clever boy? That I was reeling in ecstasy the day they dragged me to the brazier and branded me this mark on my forehead!?" →
"What do you think, clever boy? That I was reeling in ecstasy the day they dragged me to the brazier and branded this mark on my forehead!?"

Items
Crocta Fang
"The fang that came out of a Crocta's back-mouth. Some hunter say they can eat their prey from either mouth. →
"The fang that came out of a Crocta's back-mouth. Some hunters say they can eat their prey from either mouth.
M. Doucet 17 Jul, 2021 @ 3:09pm 
2021-07-17 ENG

Other Characters
Herelsor Official
"Herelsor has had... a criminality problem in the past. Theft mainly.<endline> But the problem is largely confined to... certain fringes of the population. It's a problem that solves itself with every round of conscription." →
"Herelsor has had... a criminality problem in the past. Theft mainly. But the problem is largely confined to... certain fringes of the population. It's a problem that solves itself with every round of conscription."

Huntress
"I found this sweet girl the other day, fighting for her life against a pack of Croctas. I came to her aid.<endline> She's been tagging along ever since. She's a wild Nekaroo, so she'll probably split at some point... but she hasn't yet." →
"I found this sweet girl the other day, fighting for her life against a pack of Croctas. I came to her aid. She's been tagging along ever since. She's a wild Nekaroo, so she'll probably split at some point... but she hasn't yet."

Man
"Chief isn't there. Spoke with a few colleagues: he darted off somewhere." →
"Chief isn't here. Spoke with a few colleagues: he darted off somewhere."

Refugee
"Some says the Archelites sabotaged the ArchLight and caused the explosion." →
"Some say the Archelites sabotaged the ArchLight and caused the explosion."

Tradesman
This Herelsor NPC has some issues. One of the name badges is missing during this conversation (not sure who is speaking) above: "Tell me more about it. How does it work?" Later in the same dialogue, cutscene-style text that says "Where's your proof?" shows up behind the dialogue box that says, "I don't know. It just does!" (screenshots[imgur.com])
banditbandit 24 Jul, 2021 @ 2:47am 
Heranna : Je t'avais dit que je tu tomberais avec moi !

Il y a un "je" en trop.
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