The Suicide of Rachel Foster

The Suicide of Rachel Foster

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So ... let's talk about the story (Spoilers!)
One of the reasons I gave this game a negative review ist the storyline. Although I liked the atmosphere and the hotel itself very much and I was intrigued by the character development during the dialogues, the story makes no sense to me.
Not at all.

Don't read further, if you havn't played the game yet.


So, there is Nicole our main character. She seems to be, judging from the dialogues, a brave and selfconfident young woman. Very indipendent and smart. Slowly she discovers the truth about Rachel, while wandering through the old hotel.

We read her mothers letter in the beginning, where she tells Nicole to give the money she gets from selling the hotel to Rachels family, which seems to me quite awkward at that point, but it becomes clear near the end why she demands it.

And we get to know Leonard, Nicoles father, through some details she finds on her way through the hotel. He seemed to be a very clever and educated man with a master degree in Astrophysics. How he ended up in the hotel stays a bit unclear, maybe due to marrying Nicoles mother who knows.
This man falls in love with the sixteen year old Rachel. Ok. It could have been believable, if ... we knew more about Rachel, if apart from beeing dyslexic, there was something, they had in common. The love for the stars, shared feelings for being an outsider in the worlds they live - Leonard, the astrophysic in a hotel - Rachel, maybe an atheist in a deeply religious family - at least something like that, but there is nothing except the claim they were in love and this is thin. very thin. And then there are hints, which make this love so uncomfortable to take in, like the retainer Rachel is still wearing or "her" room in the hotel basement - the room of a child, not of a teeanger. This makes it all very uncanny.
It leaves you unsatisfied. Was it a real love story? Was it plain abuse? The story leaves it so far open to the point where I have the feeling, the creators are undecided themselves and this is never good.

And there is no further explanation about Claire murdering Rachel. How did she find out about the affair? Waht kind of person is Claire? What makes her in the end murder another human being, a sixteen year old? Was it out of the blue? Did she plan it? As we know so little about Claire it just does not add up, in my opinion. For a grown woman to murder a sixteen year old it takes something. And the exact how and way stays unclear. Did Claire love Leonard so much? What was at stake? Yeah sure. Rachel was pregnant. A scandal, I get it. But we know so little, that everything about what leads Claire to the final deed seems far streched to me.
And in the end, she left Leonard anyway with Nicole.

Then, when Nicole remembers all of that she wants to kill herself? Rachel is long dead. Her father is dead, her mother is dead and Irving, Rachels brother kills himself. Irving ... the discovery that he is Rachels brother makes it seem that he is the rabbit jumping out of a hat. Hey, we have a plothole - ok, let's make Irving Rachels brother. Problem solved. What the heck? No hint, no nothing, he just the brother and after finding out the truth he kills himself. Ah ... ok. And now, even after everything is solved, the brave young independent woman Nicole wants to kill herself, too. It made me shook my head in disbelief.

I would have understood, if she suffered, if a dpressed, insecure Nicole would have arrived at the hotel, a woman tortured by her past, but she seems to be so fine that it came as a surprise to me, but not as a good one, not as a delicate plottwist, but as unrealistic as it could get.

In a good thriller the audience is deceived and surprised many times, but all this has to make sense. In this story to me nothing really adds up. Although the overall idea is great and I am not opposed to tell a story about suicide!
I just wish, they would have given the story more careful thoughts and more details. I wish they would have thought about the other characters as well.


My 2 cents about the game.


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onejerky_aye 20 feb, 2020 @ 4:19 
Nicole had the choices dudeee..

To me the story is preety good, real life like story driven hehehe
LilacShore 20 feb, 2020 @ 5:05 
Ursprungligen skrivet av onejerky_aye:
Nicole had the choices dudeee..

Yeah ... dudeee,


After the loading screen we sit in the car all equipped for suicide. This indicates to me a very strong thought about making it happen. Sure, you can turn off the engine, but why the heck in the first place?


If you like the story, then it is fine. I don't want to tell you otherwise, :)

I just wonder, if there are people out there who have the same thoughts, stumbled into the same problems like me with the story.

Senast ändrad av LilacShore; 20 feb, 2020 @ 5:06
Br0or 20 feb, 2020 @ 6:49 
There is some things about that he knows Nicole and Rachel in the way he speak and what he says. If you want to find a little thing about that what Irving told you about you can find some drawings in one of the hidden crawl spaces around the house. (sorry for any mistakes )
Senast ändrad av Br0or; 20 feb, 2020 @ 6:50
Qleejika 20 feb, 2020 @ 7:07 
I just didn’t like the ending, how could Nicole commit suicide? Stupid it all.
sleepy toad 20 feb, 2020 @ 9:58 
I didn't like the game's script either but some of the stuff you say "doesn't make sense" actually does within the game's narrative.

Rachel's ghost is real. There's no way this isn't true. On day 8 when Nicole wakes up in church not knowing how she got there, she says she only experienced sleepwalking once as a child and never again until she came to the hotel. When you get to the attic, the blackboard with "murderer" written on it turns around on its own, as does the door in the room where you find the camera crew's equipment.

TL;DR: Rachel's ghost can physically interact with the world around her, and as a result it's likely she's the one who took possession of Nicole's body to bring her to the church on day 8 and would later force her to lock herself inside her car to get revenge.

That's why all throughout the ending Nicole says she doesn't want to die but still turns on the car. I guess the choice to either let her die or have her fantasize about reviving the hotel can be seen as Rachel's ghost either achieving revenge on Nicole's family or changing her mind and instead believing in the idea that everything can go back to the way it was before.
LilacShore 20 feb, 2020 @ 14:01 
Ursprungligen skrivet av Br0or:
There is some things about that he knows Nicole and Rachel in the way he speak and what he says. If you want to find a little thing about that what Irving told you about you can find some drawings in one of the hidden crawl spaces around the house. (sorry for any mistakes )

I found the drawings and still ... it just seems to me very constructed and far fetched.
LilacShore 20 feb, 2020 @ 14:08 
Ursprungligen skrivet av sleepy toad:
I didn't like the game's script either but some of the stuff you say "doesn't make sense" actually does within the game's narrative.

Rachel's ghost is real. There's no way this isn't true. On day 8 when Nicole wakes up in church not knowing how she got there, she says she only experienced sleepwalking once as a child and never again until she came to the hotel. When you get to the attic, the blackboard with "murderer" written on it turns around on its own, as does the door in the room where you find the camera crew's equipment.

TL;DR: Rachel's ghost can physically interact with the world around her, and as a result it's likely she's the one who took possession of Nicole's body to bring her to the church on day 8 and would later force her to lock herself inside her car to get revenge.

That's why all throughout the ending Nicole says she doesn't want to die but still turns on the car. I guess the choice to either let her die or have her fantasize about reviving the hotel can be seen as Rachel's ghost either achieving revenge on Nicole's family or changing her mind and instead believing in the idea that everything can go back to the way it was before.


I totally agree about the ghost thing as far as Rachel obviously could ohysically interact. So far so good.

And still, what about the revenge? Is it a family thing?
Nicole was a girl herself. What on earth is her fault in all this? It makes no sense that Rachel wants her to commit suicide imho. Nicoles mother killed Rachel long ago an Nicoles mother is dead as well.
It seems to me - with the mannequins and the hockey stick, that at some point during plotting, the creators thought about Nicole as Rachels murderer and than abandoned the idea. Whether they thought it would be too controversial or I don't know.
The story fells so half way to me. Not really thought through, not really realistic, not really satisfying.[/spoilers]
BadLamprey 20 feb, 2020 @ 20:36 
I agree. Had to suspend my disbelief so hard for that final scene. I don't think it ruined the game for me, but I didn't like it.
Midnight77 20 feb, 2020 @ 21:02 
Since you finished The Suicide of Rachel Foster wrap this one around your head Irving spent 10 years working with Leonard and fully knowing Leonard knocked up his 16 year old sister. Yeah, ewwwwwww
Um, I don't see how so many people seem to have not understood the ending but, Nicole isn't committing suicide, nor does she want to. Rachel's ghost is forcing her. This is insanely clear, what with Nicole protesting and asking Rachel why she's killing her anyway. The reason you're not able to turn off the car sooner is because you don't have a choice, just like Nicole. Just as we could do nothing but turn the car on, Nicole didn't get a say. The second we're able to turn the car off, it's because Nicole once again has control over herself.
LilacShore 20 feb, 2020 @ 23:37 
Ursprungligen skrivet av The Ashman Cometh:
Um, I don't see how so many people seem to have not understood the ending but, Nicole isn't committing suicide, nor does she want to. Rachel's ghost is forcing her. This is insanely clear, what with Nicole protesting and asking Rachel why she's killing her anyway. The reason you're not able to turn off the car sooner is because you don't have a choice, just like Nicole. Just as we could do nothing but turn the car on, Nicole didn't get a say. The second we're able to turn the car off, it's because Nicole once again has control over herself.

This is exactly what I don't get. Why would Rachel/Rachels ghost try so desperatly to kill Nicole?
She was a kid herself when it all happend and her mother is dead.

Th "whole family revenge thing" is really thin, because we know so little about Rachel. Nicole hated Rachel for destroying her family. and before that, she was jealous of Rachel. And what about Rachel herself? Who was she? We know nothing about her except the few details Irving shares near the end.
sleepy toad 20 feb, 2020 @ 23:45 
I honestly don't think it's something worth reading into. Rachel's ghost was killed by a member of Nicole's family and her vengeful spirit lingers in the hotel waiting 'til she can take revenge however possible, even if it means killing Nicole rather than Claire.

It's something necessary for the game to have a horror aspect, maybe they thought the creepy hotel wasn't enough and wanted to crank things up with a killer ghost. It's not written very convincingly but most of the game's writing is shaky at best.
LilacShore 20 feb, 2020 @ 23:48 
Ursprungligen skrivet av Midnight77:
Since you finished The Suicide of Rachel Foster wrap this one around your head Irving spent 10 years working with Leonard and fully knowing Leonard knocked up his 16 year old sister. Yeah, ewwwwwww

This is what I mean.

The whole Rachel/Leonard love stays so unclear to the point where the story is just sloppy fabricated.
Was it love? Was it abuse? What about Irving? The dialogues in the secret room hint the he was happy for his sister in some way that she found someone who loved her on the other hand he was forced to stay in her shadows.


I do not mind a story that leaves questions, that creates openness in a good way, but I do mind plotholes. And in this case is is just sad, because it could have been a great story, if we only get to know all the characters much better.
Senast ändrad av LilacShore; 20 feb, 2020 @ 23:49
i think half of u are just upset that the main character potentially commits suicide and are uncomfortable with that. lil too heavy duty for ya.... i felt the story was fantastic the whole way through
[GAZArts] 21 feb, 2020 @ 11:14 
My understanding with regard to how the ending played out was that Nicole, at some stage during the revelation of what had transpired between her Father and Rachel and with the final reveal of how her own mother actually killed Rachel and her unborn child, caused Nicole to suffer a complete mental break down, so much so that she ended up in her car ready to "join her family". Even if you decide to not go through with the suicide and turn off the ignition, going by what Nicole says its clear she's lost her mind.
Senast ändrad av [GAZArts]; 21 feb, 2020 @ 11:18
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